1/9/1 (sin)
A 1/9/1 contest entry...22 total reviews
Comment from OLA THOMAS
You stung every heart that is still alive with this short but powerful work. The artwork drives home the message so much that one needs to examine himself deeply.
ola thomas
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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You stung every heart that is still alive with this short but powerful work. The artwork drives home the message so much that one needs to examine himself deeply.
ola thomas
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you very much, Ola. I'm happy that you enjoyed the message it conveys, and I deeply appreciate your assessment.
Comment from adewpearl
Dramatic presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 1/9/1 syllable count for the contest
great word choices that add to the dramatic intensity of this scene - strong sensory appeal and vivid descriptions
Brooke
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Dramatic presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 1/9/1 syllable count for the contest
great word choices that add to the dramatic intensity of this scene - strong sensory appeal and vivid descriptions
Brooke
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you very much, Brooke, for your breakdown and review of this. It is greatly appreciated:).