Don't Stop Me Now
200 words. Contest Entry47 total reviews
Comment from lindalcreel
I think several of the chapters could have applied to this 200 word post. The guy sounded like a beast anyway, so I'm thinking he got what he deserved. I think you did a fantastic job consider all of the requirements. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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I think several of the chapters could have applied to this 200 word post. The guy sounded like a beast anyway, so I'm thinking he got what he deserved. I think you did a fantastic job consider all of the requirements. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Yep, I got em all in there. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
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My pleasure:)
Comment from Genya
What a brilliant entry for this contest. Not only one Queen song, but several and all put together so brilliantly. Liked the punn...aint nobody gonna treat Queen like that. This short story really brought Queen alive again. I just loved the band and their music Good luck in the contest with this. Fantastic. Genya
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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What a brilliant entry for this contest. Not only one Queen song, but several and all put together so brilliantly. Liked the punn...aint nobody gonna treat Queen like that. This short story really brought Queen alive again. I just loved the band and their music Good luck in the contest with this. Fantastic. Genya
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Genya, you got it dead on. Thanks for your great review!
Comment from Judy Couch
YOu did a great job of incorporating all the prompts into one story. I don't like the story but I admire your ability to pull it together.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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YOu did a great job of incorporating all the prompts into one story. I don't like the story but I admire your ability to pull it together.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Judy, you time and review are much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Muffins
A creative use of this prompt. It's exciting, sexy, and hilarious. This scene swings out rich dialogue, a spicy taste of the dark side and its consequences when the rules are not obeyed. This was something I didn't expect to read. Your imagination is on fire with this work! Loved it.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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A creative use of this prompt. It's exciting, sexy, and hilarious. This scene swings out rich dialogue, a spicy taste of the dark side and its consequences when the rules are not obeyed. This was something I didn't expect to read. Your imagination is on fire with this work! Loved it.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Muffins, wow, Thank you so much. This week I just started back writing after like a five year break and my imagination is on fire.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Dim big butt mama's sure can manipulate us knightly pawns to do whatever they want. Suckers and we know it. A whole lot said with so few words, makes for a fun read. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Dim big butt mama's sure can manipulate us knightly pawns to do whatever they want. Suckers and we know it. A whole lot said with so few words, makes for a fun read. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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lol, too funny. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from CR Delport
I think you were only supposed to choose one title but think you made clever use of all of them :) Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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I think you were only supposed to choose one title but think you made clever use of all of them :) Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks, CR, for the great review.
Comment from gypsycaravan
That was very clever using several of the titles to write your contest entry. The dialog was well-written and appropriate for the scene. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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That was very clever using several of the titles to write your contest entry. The dialog was well-written and appropriate for the scene. Best of luck.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it!
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it!
Comment from pfwelder
That must have taken a lot of thought in order to get all the titles in this story.
You managed to pull it off and still write a completely believable story. I thought it was very well written. I especially liked the line with Queen in it as you got the band in on it too. Great job with a lot of imagination. I only gave 5 stars so I could give you 6 later on so keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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That must have taken a lot of thought in order to get all the titles in this story.
You managed to pull it off and still write a completely believable story. I thought it was very well written. I especially liked the line with Queen in it as you got the band in on it too. Great job with a lot of imagination. I only gave 5 stars so I could give you 6 later on so keep up the good work.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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I'll take the six now please...lol, Thank you for the awesome review. It is much appreciated. I'm glad you liked the story, it was actually pretty fun to write.
Comment from royowen
You certainly fulfilled the requirements of the entry in this contest, it communicated the desired affect in this well written narrative, it was an unusual ending, a surprise in the light of the activity, but in the context of the contest was perfect! Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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You certainly fulfilled the requirements of the entry in this contest, it communicated the desired affect in this well written narrative, it was an unusual ending, a surprise in the light of the activity, but in the context of the contest was perfect! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Roy, Thanks for the awesome review and stopping by to read, it is much appreciated.
Comment from High Wire Girl
I love this piece! It is strong, deliberate and confident. Efficiency is key. With such carefully chosen words, it tells the story from three distinct perspectives. Just wonderful.
In just a short amount of time, I can adapt to the pace of the story. As well, I can care about each of the characters enough because enough details have been offered to flesh them out.
I am new to the site, and this is my first time giving six stars. It is well-deserved. Terrific effort!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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I love this piece! It is strong, deliberate and confident. Efficiency is key. With such carefully chosen words, it tells the story from three distinct perspectives. Just wonderful.
In just a short amount of time, I can adapt to the pace of the story. As well, I can care about each of the characters enough because enough details have been offered to flesh them out.
I am new to the site, and this is my first time giving six stars. It is well-deserved. Terrific effort!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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High Wire Girl, Thank you very much for your awesome and kind review. I can only hope the everyone feels the same in this contest. I am humbled by someone of your talent handing me their first six star. Once again Thank you very much
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Guess what! I didn't even look to see who wrote this. Now that I see it's you, I'm doubly glad. Good luck. Your voice is great!