Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Unfaithfulness has destroyed many a marriage. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read. Very good job.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thank you, Charlie.

reply by c_lucas on 09-Sep-2014

You're welcome, Amahra. Charlie

Comment from Jackreese

Excellent

I really enjoyed this it had all the elements of a traditional soap opera. Secrets, blackmail and the wealthy just another day in Dallas. (No pun intended) The characters were believable, the dialogue real and the story left me wanting more. I will be looking forward to the rest.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thank you, Jackreese, for this fine review.

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

Is there still a chance for them? I love that Margaret isn't Big Tom's daughter. That might explain why she acts the way she does -- like mother like daughter. This scandal would ruin the whole family. I think the best thing for all concerned would be for Margaret to leave and never come back. My heart breaks for that poor little girl who misses her daddy and doesn't understand any of this. At least Grace is being generous and allowing him to see his little girl. A lot of other women wouldn't.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thank you, lindalcreel for keeping up with the story. I'll be posting the new chapters as fast as the old ones expire. I don't want people to wait too long and forget the characters.

reply by lindalcreel on 10-Sep-2014

My pleasure:)

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Nearly half of Nathan's animal patients belong to [BELONGED to >> past tense]

anything to eat or drink?" she asked, just being polite. [personally, I would get rid of the "just being polite." It's pretty obvious to the reader there is a gulf between them.]

Another excellent chapter, Ama. Your characters are solid, consistent and real.



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 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thanks, Jay. I'll go back over and make those changes.

Comment from onebrit

Excellent

Wow, these characters act in unexpected ways. Such a lot of secrets. I like the way you write, it's very free form and easy to follow. Good dialogue and well developed characters.

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 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thank you, onebrit. I appreciate your comments.