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A young woman finds violence in the woods.23 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! You have met the contest requirements beautifully with this timely Halloween write. This was a great story and the first time I ever heard of ice cream causing nightmares - I always thought it was blood sausage that did that. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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LOL! You have met the contest requirements beautifully with this timely Halloween write. This was a great story and the first time I ever heard of ice cream causing nightmares - I always thought it was blood sausage that did that. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Thank you Mystic again for the excellent review and stars. You are too funny, blood sausage, though it would make sense LOL. God Bless!
Comment from Writing~Soith
Photo was amazingly graphic (I literally couldn't look due to a fear of clowns lol) but great job there.
I found this to be totally grabbing from the start and it held me then toward the middle it did become a bit predictive. I honestly expected the Stephen King IT reference to emerge. You did a wonderful job though. I would work on being more vague though in the future.
The slight word change is a great start!
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Photo was amazingly graphic (I literally couldn't look due to a fear of clowns lol) but great job there.
I found this to be totally grabbing from the start and it held me then toward the middle it did become a bit predictive. I honestly expected the Stephen King IT reference to emerge. You did a wonderful job though. I would work on being more vague though in the future.
The slight word change is a great start!
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Thank you Writing for the great review and feedback. I hate that it became predictable. I went in and changed the word clown to creature, hoping this will not reference a Stephen King story. Any other help will be greatly appreciated. God Bless!
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I am going to re-read now:)
Comment from lancellot
A little nightmare seen. No violence actually take place, but I understand why you used the warning. Ice cream and horror movies are a bad mix. Well done.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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A little nightmare seen. No violence actually take place, but I understand why you used the warning. Ice cream and horror movies are a bad mix. Well done.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Thank you lancellot, for the excellent review and generous stars. I received the first review and was told the story was predictable and was given 3 stars. If you have any critique, it would be much appreciated. God Bless!
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No, I didn't think it was dream.