Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

their is absolutely nothing wrong with light and silly. that's what keep us young. i plant sunflowers every year in my yard. they all don't take. maybe i'll post your poem next to them.

excuse the non-capitalization. i'm typing one handed. a cup of coffee rests in my other. nicely done, carolyn.

john

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

I can just see you 'peck, peck, pecking and sip, sip, sipping' away. Feel free to print and put on a post in your garden. LOL.. I would be honored.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

cute sun flowers for this display of happiness for this cute and festive poem it is a real eye opener and the sun flower seeds are delicious

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

Sunflower seeds are a favorite of mine... I have gotten a bit lazy since I find you can get them already shelled and salted. I put them on salads real often as well.
So happy you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn

reply by country ranch writer on 05-Jan-2015

a friend of mine gave me some spaghetti squash seeds and I baked them like I would pumpkin seeds put salt on them and they were good

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Carolyn. This was the perfect start to my evenings reviewing. This is such a bright and witty and light hearted piece and I got a real kick out of it. Well done mate, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

Happy you got a kick out of 'I Dream of Sunflowers,'Fez. It was a fun poem to write. :-) Carolyn

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I think I would capitalize dreams in the title. A lovely and light poem with good use rhyme/ proximate rhyme. This was a joy to read, my friend~Debbie

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

Did it, and thank you so much my friend. It is good to see you Debbie, stay warm. I'm glad you liked this little poem. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Yes, a silly set of lines but i enjoyed every rhyme. You do have a gift for coining beautiful lines no matter how silly or funny the intention is. The art work is perfect for conveying your message. Thanks for sharing and God bless.

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

Thanks nassus1957, for your fun comments. I am delighted you enjoyed 'I Dream of Sunflowers.' It was fun to write.
:-) Carolyn