Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

funny and yet serious at the same time.
I laughed then I wondered what I was laughing at. I hope this is the way you meant it to be.
nicely done

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks, Barb.

This is something new for me and yes, it is meant to be a little ambiguous - there is humour there where you find it and maybe the hint of a serious message as well - just don't ask me what it is...

Steve