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Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Keep Your Eyes On Calvary"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
30 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is in my mine a six, but alas I have none left. I love the words and we do need to keep our eyes on Calvary. Today is the accepted day of salvation as we have not guarantee we will be afforded another day. Blessing, Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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This is in my mine a six, but alas I have none left. I love the words and we do need to keep our eyes on Calvary. Today is the accepted day of salvation as we have not guarantee we will be afforded another day. Blessing, Patricia
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. I really do appreciate them and all your support.
Comment from adewpearl
strong rhymes
thoughtful use of
alliteration
good use of enjambment
effective repetition of cast your vote for Jesus in delivering your powerful message in this poem of faith
Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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strong rhymes
thoughtful use of
alliteration
good use of enjambment
effective repetition of cast your vote for Jesus in delivering your powerful message in this poem of faith
Brooke
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is quite an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This story is so very relevant today as it was two thousand years ago. The parables and meanings of these Bible stories will reverberate through the ages. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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This is quite an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This story is so very relevant today as it was two thousand years ago. The parables and meanings of these Bible stories will reverberate through the ages. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them very much.
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My pleasure
Comment from petalangela
A soothing flow of of hopeful words. Nectar to those who thirst food for the hungry and inquisitiveness for the uninformed
The message is crystal clear I hope it helps to bring at least one person to your god.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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A soothing flow of of hopeful words. Nectar to those who thirst food for the hungry and inquisitiveness for the uninformed
The message is crystal clear I hope it helps to bring at least one person to your god.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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That is God with a capital "G" if you please. Thanks for your comments. Really do appreciate them very much.
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Oops sorry my inability to write correctly strikes again. I am not a disbeliever per se just don't relate
Comment from Pantygynt
If this is a first attempt I tremble to think what you will do with more practice. Once again you are absolutely true to your style; your rhyme and rhythm is impeccable and those refrain lines one hundred percent right for the piece. A truly exceptional piece of work.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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If this is a first attempt I tremble to think what you will do with more practice. Once again you are absolutely true to your style; your rhyme and rhythm is impeccable and those refrain lines one hundred percent right for the piece. A truly exceptional piece of work.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. I really do appreciate them, and yes, this is my first attempt at Christian lyrics. I have always been a Country music Lyricist, and fortunately the two genres fit together pretty nicely.
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One is almost a subsidiary group of the other it seems to me.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello good friend
I enjoyed you song
A clear message of the One who died for us.
My best to you.
Thanks for using my artwork, I'm honored.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Hello good friend
I enjoyed you song
A clear message of the One who died for us.
My best to you.
Thanks for using my artwork, I'm honored.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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You are welcome and thank you for letting me use it and for your comments. I will add that into my notes.
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You are welcome, please take a look at my written work here on Fanstory when you can. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment from pharp
If this is your first attempt for writing Christian lyrics, I guess you got it right! Exceptionally done my friend, I enjoyed the read for the beginning to the end; very smooth flow, lyrics are profound and a great message within. Thanks for sharing .
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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If this is your first attempt for writing Christian lyrics, I guess you got it right! Exceptionally done my friend, I enjoyed the read for the beginning to the end; very smooth flow, lyrics are profound and a great message within. Thanks for sharing .
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them.
Comment from lakeport
keep your eyes on the calvary, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem. Very nice flow, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, Lakeport.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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keep your eyes on the calvary, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem. Very nice flow, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, Lakeport.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them.
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you are very welcome, Lakeport.
Comment from bob cullen
This probably deserved a six.
My friend you have summed up the meaning of life in this poem. I absolutely loved the last two lines in each verse.
This could so easily be converted to music and be sung as a Hymn in Church on Sundays.
I really loved the message
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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This probably deserved a six.
My friend you have summed up the meaning of life in this poem. I absolutely loved the last two lines in each verse.
This could so easily be converted to music and be sung as a Hymn in Church on Sundays.
I really loved the message
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your wonderful comments. Glad you appreciated my poem.
Comment from dragonpoet
Very evangelical and inspiriing poem. I like the repetition of the last two lines of each stanza. It heightens the plea.
This is a good freeverse poem with some rhyme.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Very evangelical and inspiriing poem. I like the repetition of the last two lines of each stanza. It heightens the plea.
This is a good freeverse poem with some rhyme.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them a lot.
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No problem.
dragonpoet