Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Eggs Over Easy"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from Sis Cat
This is a great foodie response to a writing prompt. I can hear your words sang in my ears. Lyrics have a great country music feel about it. I feel the man's dilemma and resolve. The chorus is also catchy, too. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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This is a great foodie response to a writing prompt. I can hear your words sang in my ears. Lyrics have a great country music feel about it. I feel the man's dilemma and resolve. The chorus is also catchy, too. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support as always.
Comment from artemis53
Interesting piece. I'm just wondering if it's based on reality. If not, it fits the criteria and seems to be in line with the criteria. If it is real I wonder about the writer's ability to be honest with themselves since no love can be real until another has vanished.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Interesting piece. I'm just wondering if it's based on reality. If not, it fits the criteria and seems to be in line with the criteria. If it is real I wonder about the writer's ability to be honest with themselves since no love can be real until another has vanished.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from H.C. Caswell
Bitter sweet when one thinks the grass is greener on the other side. I love how you show, one must be finished and a flame extinguished, before lighting a new. Yet loving one, and longing for another, tends to be a theme of many.
Great work!
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Bitter sweet when one thinks the grass is greener on the other side. I love how you show, one must be finished and a flame extinguished, before lighting a new. Yet loving one, and longing for another, tends to be a theme of many.
Great work!
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Praise000
You have managed to bring out to the reader the exact state in which the writer is in through carefully chosen words."My mind kept on aching, my heart kept on breaking..." Great picture to complement your story. Best wishes. From Praise000
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You have managed to bring out to the reader the exact state in which the writer is in through carefully chosen words."My mind kept on aching, my heart kept on breaking..." Great picture to complement your story. Best wishes. From Praise000
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support.
Comment from kiwijenny
What no bacon?
Sorry love was mistaken...
perhaps you're forsaken
Now your heart is achin'
Maybe if there'd been bacon
Sorry I haven't eaten yet ...great song made my tummy rumble
God bless
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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What no bacon?
Sorry love was mistaken...
perhaps you're forsaken
Now your heart is achin'
Maybe if there'd been bacon
Sorry I haven't eaten yet ...great song made my tummy rumble
God bless
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Always appreciate your comments and support. Thank you.
Comment from patcelaw
This indeed read like the lyrics to a country music song. Maybe someone will pick it up and it will become a hit.
Enjoy your eggs over easy and warm coffee. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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This indeed read like the lyrics to a country music song. Maybe someone will pick it up and it will become a hit.
Enjoy your eggs over easy and warm coffee. Patricia
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you. Always appreciate your thoughtful insights.
Comment from Dean Kuch
It seems as if the "cock" in this hen house has flown his coup for another chick.
Hey, if you've got eggs over easy, and black coffee to warm you, you've got something, at least.
Good rhyming and story. It follows the sad, despondent theme of a country & western song quite well.
Best of luck to you in the contest...~Dean
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It seems as if the "cock" in this hen house has flown his coup for another chick.
Hey, if you've got eggs over easy, and black coffee to warm you, you've got something, at least.
Good rhyming and story. It follows the sad, despondent theme of a country & western song quite well.
Best of luck to you in the contest...~Dean
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Appreciate these comments and your support Dean. I really was challenged by a Fanstorian to write a Country song about food and will be waiting to see how well I actually did.
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I think you'll do well, Brett. You should, anyway.
Again, good luck...~Dean ;)
Comment from Pantygynt
I thought to myself: "Hang on this isn't about food, it's about being dumped!" And then again, although it is about being dumped it is also about comfort eating and that leads to obesity so it isn't just a trite little piece of C&W it is about a major problem that is affecting the affluent countries of the world! Gosh! I can make even eggs over easy sound internationally important. I liked this lots. As an Englishman I'm not absolutely sure what 'eggs over easy' are but I sure like the sound of them! Please tell me. Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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I thought to myself: "Hang on this isn't about food, it's about being dumped!" And then again, although it is about being dumped it is also about comfort eating and that leads to obesity so it isn't just a trite little piece of C&W it is about a major problem that is affecting the affluent countries of the world! Gosh! I can make even eggs over easy sound internationally important. I liked this lots. As an Englishman I'm not absolutely sure what 'eggs over easy' are but I sure like the sound of them! Please tell me. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Eggs over easy is a quick method of briefly frying eggs on one side, then quickly turning them over to the other side without breaking the yoke, but only for a brief frying on that side as well. Thanks for your comments and support. Like I said I had a Fanstorian challenge me to write a Country song about food, something I had never even thought of doing, so naturally I just had to. The contest will see how well they go over on this site. Glad you enjoyed it.
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I like mine sunny side up!
Comment from misscookie
Well this is the first dear John letter serve with a nice breakfast.
These things happen to the best of us. That why they say be were of getting involved on a rebound.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Well this is the first dear John letter serve with a nice breakfast.
These things happen to the best of us. That why they say be were of getting involved on a rebound.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you misscookie. Like I said I had a Fanstorian challenge me to write a Country song about food, so, naturally I just had to. Then I created this contest simply to see how well they do on this site. Appreciate your support always!
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You're every welcome, It was a great idea.
I think I missed it, I can't remember
Cookie have a blessed weekend.
Cookie
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo of fried eggs that complements your poem perfectly. I can see this can be sung, so a song-lyric. I really enjoyed the refrain, best lines as well. Best wishes for the prompt.
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Excellent photo of fried eggs that complements your poem perfectly. I can see this can be sung, so a song-lyric. I really enjoyed the refrain, best lines as well. Best wishes for the prompt.
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Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. I have written Country song lyrics about a whole lot of things but never food. Didn't know I could until I was challenged by a Fanstorian to do so. So, I created this little contest, mostly to see how well these lyrics go over on this site. Will be interesting to find out. Appreciate your review.