Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Celebrate Your Leaving"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from Tatarka2
As I read this, I could almost "hear" this song set to country music. I think you have a winner here, especially as lyrics. The poem has a kind of "country-rhythm" to it, and the lyrics sound just like the message of a country-western song.
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As I read this, I could almost "hear" this song set to country music. I think you have a winner here, especially as lyrics. The poem has a kind of "country-rhythm" to it, and the lyrics sound just like the message of a country-western song.
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I hope so. They are Country music lyrics. Thanks for your comments.
Comment from rjuselius
This is an excellent choice for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! It showcases well the importance of a good relationship. And yes you will get over it in time.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck with the contest!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
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This is an excellent choice for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! It showcases well the importance of a good relationship. And yes you will get over it in time.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck with the contest!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Dom G Robles
A contest entry. A reminiscence poem. The writer writes his nostalgic feelings about parting with his loved one. He remembers the time they were together
and he drives away his pain by drinking bear or liquor. The rhyme is excellent. His expressions are straightforward. And he is still hoping that his lover may call
or return while he is in town reminiscing--celebrating--remembering the days gone by. Congratulation's. Dom
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A contest entry. A reminiscence poem. The writer writes his nostalgic feelings about parting with his loved one. He remembers the time they were together
and he drives away his pain by drinking bear or liquor. The rhyme is excellent. His expressions are straightforward. And he is still hoping that his lover may call
or return while he is in town reminiscing--celebrating--remembering the days gone by. Congratulation's. Dom
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Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, clear and thought provoking. The reader found this poem to have a
different and creative approach. The artwork conveys celebrations as it compliments the theme of this poem.
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, clear and thought provoking. The reader found this poem to have a
different and creative approach. The artwork conveys celebrations as it compliments the theme of this poem.
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Thanks for your comments. and support.
Comment from amahra
I hope it's not too late to vote; I really like this poem. It's amazingly original and something that happens all too often in relationships. Great job, my friend.
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I hope it's not too late to vote; I really like this poem. It's amazingly original and something that happens all too often in relationships. Great job, my friend.
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from walbc
A very descriptive write, evoking imagery that is sad and lonely. Your rhyming and rhythm are excellent, and your poem gets your message across. I wish you all the best in the contest. Warm regards, Wendy.
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A very descriptive write, evoking imagery that is sad and lonely. Your rhyming and rhythm are excellent, and your poem gets your message across. I wish you all the best in the contest. Warm regards, Wendy.
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from risktaker
I feel the regret, pain, and hurt over losing a person you enjoyed having in your life.Acceptance that the dreams, fantasies, and hope for events with the person is forever gone. drinking numbs the pain temporarily and prevents grieving the loss in a healthy manner so you can move on.Feel the pain, feel the pain, and start over again with a new love and a healed open heart.
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I feel the regret, pain, and hurt over losing a person you enjoyed having in your life.Acceptance that the dreams, fantasies, and hope for events with the person is forever gone. drinking numbs the pain temporarily and prevents grieving the loss in a healthy manner so you can move on.Feel the pain, feel the pain, and start over again with a new love and a healed open heart.
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Comment from K. Lorraine
Very true words for those of us who have loved and lost...
The story line flowed nicely from line to line and the rhyme was good throughout the poem.
Set 'em up, slam 'em back, and forget you once again. Was a touch of genius.
I do hope this piece is purely fiction...
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest...
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Very true words for those of us who have loved and lost...
The story line flowed nicely from line to line and the rhyme was good throughout the poem.
Set 'em up, slam 'em back, and forget you once again. Was a touch of genius.
I do hope this piece is purely fiction...
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest...
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from livelylinda
Author: well, that is one way to do it! Pick up the bottle of alcohol and another one and another one. This is actually not a celebration, it is a drowning of ones sorrows. A little satire, perhaps? Good luck in the contest. livelylinda
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Author: well, that is one way to do it! Pick up the bottle of alcohol and another one and another one. This is actually not a celebration, it is a drowning of ones sorrows. A little satire, perhaps? Good luck in the contest. livelylinda
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from royowen
It sounds very much like a country song with all the melancholy that goes with it, the lyrics are skilfully and deftly crafted poem, the language is great and descriptively image creating, the meter/tempo is even and the abab rhyming plus proximates, well done, blessings, Roy.
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It sounds very much like a country song with all the melancholy that goes with it, the lyrics are skilfully and deftly crafted poem, the language is great and descriptively image creating, the meter/tempo is even and the abab rhyming plus proximates, well done, blessings, Roy.
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Thanks for your comments and support as always.
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Most welcome