Smokey at the grooming parlor.
A short story about the event.24 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Some dogs take on a whole new look after they have been washed and groomed. This is very well written with very good imagery. There is a smooth flow of words, and good descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Some dogs take on a whole new look after they have been washed and groomed. This is very well written with very good imagery. There is a smooth flow of words, and good descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
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You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from mumsyone
He is beautiful, for sure, Ine, and I think he must have a very happy home. I'm awarding 5 stars, knowing that you will make corrections.
Last Wednesday(,) Smokey had his first appointment with this nice lady(,) to get his hair cut. He could hardly see, as the hairs fell (had fallen) over his eyes.
You can see that on the first photo,(remove , that) that I made (took)- (on the first photo I took). He behaved well for his age. Robert, my husband(,) went to collect him. We both think he is absolutely beautiful, and most important() he can SEE again.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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He is beautiful, for sure, Ine, and I think he must have a very happy home. I'm awarding 5 stars, knowing that you will make corrections.
Last Wednesday(,) Smokey had his first appointment with this nice lady(,) to get his hair cut. He could hardly see, as the hairs fell (had fallen) over his eyes.
You can see that on the first photo,(remove , that) that I made (took)- (on the first photo I took). He behaved well for his age. Robert, my husband(,) went to collect him. We both think he is absolutely beautiful, and most important() he can SEE again.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Ine,
What a cute story about Smokey. He looks so much better with his hair cut and it's great that he can see better now. What a cutely he is. I think you mentioned what kind of dog he was before, but of course I've forgotten. What is he?
Kat
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hi Ine,
What a cute story about Smokey. He looks so much better with his hair cut and it's great that he can see better now. What a cutely he is. I think you mentioned what kind of dog he was before, but of course I've forgotten. What is he?
Kat
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for the lovely six. He is a Shih Tzu
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With my memory I'll probably forget again but it's nice to know he's a Shih Tzu. Thanks!
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Ine. Smokey is adorable and I enjoyed reading about him and seeing his photo. I'll bet he feels wonderful now that he's been groomed. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hi Ine. Smokey is adorable and I enjoyed reading about him and seeing his photo. I'll bet he feels wonderful now that he's been groomed. Marilyn
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.