2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "haiku (where green trees)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Debbie Noland
Interesting precision in the way your haiku pinpoints the horizon at sunrise. The yellow background reinforces the act of blinding." The verb "kiss" gives a certain sensuality to the event. Deceptively simple but conveying an abundance of meaning.
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Interesting precision in the way your haiku pinpoints the horizon at sunrise. The yellow background reinforces the act of blinding." The verb "kiss" gives a certain sensuality to the event. Deceptively simple but conveying an abundance of meaning.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thank you Debbie :)