Comment from Janet7053

Excellent

You said a mouthful, dear Brett. I am intrigued at the image you used. It is far from the stereotypical picture we would have in our mind of someone being unfaithful. That is what intrigues...Women and men of all appearances and age are longing for love and companionship. A lesson learned the hard way; having done to him what he was doing to her.
Meter might better be served like this:
Till you can no longer tell wrong from right
Great rhyming aabb pattern.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Women need love, of that there's no doubt,
You needed a shove, to help figure it out.
Now it's to late and your marriage is done,
It takes one to know one and nobody won.
You are a very understanding guy Brett.
Sorry for your loss. :<) Nancy

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015

I wasn't. She needed to go. After 20 years of marriage. Then I wised up and married the right women 15 years ago. Funny how life weaves its way around us. Appreciate your comments and support indeed.

reply by nancy_e_davis on 02-Aug-2015

It is, I agreee.

Comment from TPAC

Exceptional

Ring that bell, all lines poetic in structuring detailing love intents from writer heart, Cupid struck, victim mad foaming of mouth, one must ignore -I like it, need to boast my efforts to such dreams you have accomplished in this write

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Yep, sometimes the cheater is also cheated on. Your poem is in great form - rhyme and rhythm. I like the repetition in the last stanza.
teresa

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Well, human being are complicated creatures. Sometimes I think our ability for endless love can cloud our judgment. You're correct, right and wrong are not so easy to define in matters of the heart. Well written.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

This is so honest and very nicely done.
Flows easy from one part to the next making it interesting to get to the end to see how you put it all together.
Good one

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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