Short Form Poetry
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Comment from nordicgirl
No easy task to generaye some real feeling with one of these. This little offering takes the reader back and then makes him soar forward with a feeling of yourh. Totally nailed this. Perfection.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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No easy task to generaye some real feeling with one of these. This little offering takes the reader back and then makes him soar forward with a feeling of yourh. Totally nailed this. Perfection.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from ellie6
A wise poem. It seems that it is only by letting go of all the inconsequential things that anchor us, can we be really free. Well thought out.
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A wise poem. It seems that it is only by letting go of all the inconsequential things that anchor us, can we be really free. Well thought out.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
Comment from SilentNinja2930
This was a good poem about finding true freedom by releasing a kite. I watched a show once where the characters released balloons into the sky. They wrote their big, impossible dreams on slips of paper and tied them to the balloons. This sort of reminded me of that, because in a way, they were freeing themselves from their individual burdens. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
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This was a good poem about finding true freedom by releasing a kite. I watched a show once where the characters released balloons into the sky. They wrote their big, impossible dreams on slips of paper and tied them to the balloons. This sort of reminded me of that, because in a way, they were freeing themselves from their individual burdens. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
Comment from krys123
Mikey;
-totally a brilliant and imaginative concept in writing which is truly inventive and ingeniously creative.
-You captured the essence of freedom by letting the kite go which is also a good example of trust.
-I love the picture which is definitely complementary and relative to the poem.
-Good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you always Mikey.
Alex
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Mikey;
-totally a brilliant and imaginative concept in writing which is truly inventive and ingeniously creative.
-You captured the essence of freedom by letting the kite go which is also a good example of trust.
-I love the picture which is definitely complementary and relative to the poem.
-Good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you always Mikey.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
Comment from seaglass
A busy writer thou art, tonight. I like this. It made me smile because I got as much pleasure from releasing my kite at the end of the day as I did flying it. Perhaps that's an inner appreciation for freedom that some of us have.
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A busy writer thou art, tonight. I like this. It made me smile because I got as much pleasure from releasing my kite at the end of the day as I did flying it. Perhaps that's an inner appreciation for freedom that some of us have.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
Comment from Deborah Marie
Nice lune with well incorporated artwork. The two compliment each other. Smooth reading... Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming. God Bless, Deb
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Nice lune with well incorporated artwork. The two compliment each other. Smooth reading... Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming. God Bless, Deb
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Lune
Finding Freedom
by michaelcahill
Beautiful Lune about letting go, releasing that kite so it can fly high. Good job~!
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Lune
Finding Freedom
by michaelcahill
Beautiful Lune about letting go, releasing that kite so it can fly high. Good job~!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, that's very interesting. Yes, there is a sense of Freedom that comes from flying anything, including a kite. And then releasing it, so it can be free too. Very good idea.
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Hmm, that's very interesting. Yes, there is a sense of Freedom that comes from flying anything, including a kite. And then releasing it, so it can be free too. Very good idea.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. Didn't I just read a poem from that had me carefully going over each line to read the deeper meaning. And then - this. I Loved it. I never heard of anyone suggestion releasing a kite to see freedom. Not sure that's a good idea! But I do love the message. Great job.
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Wow. Didn't I just read a poem from that had me carefully going over each line to read the deeper meaning. And then - this. I Loved it. I never heard of anyone suggestion releasing a kite to see freedom. Not sure that's a good idea! But I do love the message. Great job.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2015