Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Turn The Lights Down Low"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
27 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi...
_ Love the picture! I wish I that bedroom.
_ Sounds to me like an affair going on. Having been married to a cheater many years ago, one never forgets.
_ When they start saying it's not right, but it feels so right---not justification for cheating.
_ However, I could be interpreting all wrong. It's been known to happen.
_ Well penned and presented entry.
_ Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Hi...
_ Love the picture! I wish I that bedroom.
_ Sounds to me like an affair going on. Having been married to a cheater many years ago, one never forgets.
_ When they start saying it's not right, but it feels so right---not justification for cheating.
_ However, I could be interpreting all wrong. It's been known to happen.
_ Well penned and presented entry.
_ Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Always appreciate them very much.
Comment from Sis Cat
An effective poem about the narcotic effects of a love affair hidden behind closed doors. I feel the woman's hidden hunger and desire. Your poem captured the burning flame of love.
I do wonder if this will last and if she will have a life outside of her lover who has a wife. For now, she is focused on the present with little thought of tomorrow.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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An effective poem about the narcotic effects of a love affair hidden behind closed doors. I feel the woman's hidden hunger and desire. Your poem captured the burning flame of love.
I do wonder if this will last and if she will have a life outside of her lover who has a wife. For now, she is focused on the present with little thought of tomorrow.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from royowen
A very smooth delivery and entry in this "behind the door" contest. I love the repetitive nature and the similarly repeated emphasis of the poetic delivery. The reading out loud is smooth and interestingly captivating. The unrhymed stanzas make it suitable for this theme, of the bi stanzed extra sentence, well done, slightly unusual poetic expression, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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A very smooth delivery and entry in this "behind the door" contest. I love the repetitive nature and the similarly repeated emphasis of the poetic delivery. The reading out loud is smooth and interestingly captivating. The unrhymed stanzas make it suitable for this theme, of the bi stanzed extra sentence, well done, slightly unusual poetic expression, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed my little Country lyric.
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Well done
Comment from Glasstruth
Sound very much like song lyrics. Has a natural flow, and the rhyming is as smooth as a well written song. Love the repetition of "Turn the lights down low" makes it sound like it's happening right now. Wonderfully penned. Les
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Sound very much like song lyrics. Has a natural flow, and the rhyming is as smooth as a well written song. Love the repetition of "Turn the lights down low" makes it sound like it's happening right now. Wonderfully penned. Les
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed my Country lyric.
Comment from JanetRussek
Very nicely written. It flows smoothly and the rhyme is lovely. I found it touching and the message clear. Great picture too. It is perfect for this piece. Good work.
Warm Regards,
Janet
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Very nicely written. It flows smoothly and the rhyme is lovely. I found it touching and the message clear. Great picture too. It is perfect for this piece. Good work.
Warm Regards,
Janet
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from robina1978
Beautiful photo of a bedroom, that complements your poem perfectly. I liked the repeating lines, but it might disturb some reviewers. Nice idea to make love behind the closed door. Best wishes for the prompt.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Beautiful photo of a bedroom, that complements your poem perfectly. I liked the repeating lines, but it might disturb some reviewers. Nice idea to make love behind the closed door. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed my little lyric.
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. It sounds like one of those romantic secret loves that the mister and missus hopefully never finds out about. Good job and a great entry. Well done.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Very nice. It sounds like one of those romantic secret loves that the mister and missus hopefully never finds out about. Good job and a great entry. Well done.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.