Comment from JW

Excellent

Even though this haiku is short - it is so very descriptive.

It's words is short in number, yet - the scene it describes is so complete.

In reading it, I could not help but recall the scenes I've view upon turning over a leaf.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Hello JW, you understand this haiku so well, that was my intention. I remember as a child, looking under the leaves. I thank you for the awesome review and kind words.

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

This is a fun and vivid October poem. I enjoyed your detail of looking under a leaf to see bugs' October fest. Your poem is also humorous. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank you very much Sis Cat. I appreciate your awesome review.

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Great piece that makes perfect sense as the soil covering deteriorates to loam with the help of the insects and is tied in well together. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank you very much artemis, that is exactly what I was trying to express, I am glad you got it. Thank you very much for the awesome review.

Comment from Tessa Kay

Excellent

I immediately said, 'I like this one'. So many people think of October in connection with autumn, this one gives it a twist, while still describing features of nature.
Very well done.
All the best in the competition. :)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank you very much Tessa, I appreciate your awesome review and kind words.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

This is very enjoyable to read, the words create wonderful imagery. I can imagine the critters calling into the Old Log pub and having a right old time. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank you very much John. I appreciate the awesome review and kind words.

Comment from lightink

Excellent

This made me smile! "bug's October fest" - perfect satori line for a very lively and squirmy image! Great poem with lovely personification!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

thank you lightink :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, this is a very witty and entertaining entry into the October Nature haiku. It seems to me that you have followed all the rules and we get a very clear picture of exactly the scene you are painting.

Best wishes to you in the contest. This is a fun one.

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank you Gloria :)

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I loved what you wrote here very much
for these words I guess earth critters
love to eat drink and dance.

All the best for the contest.

Honeytree

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank you Honeytree :)

reply by honeytree on 08-Oct-2015

Liked what you wrote.

Honeytree

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

This creates such a lovely vision of critters enjoying October, as if it was October fest, but us humans go for the beer. Read your author notes, and they're a lot of rules to follow. You did a magnificent job! Les

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015

Thank yo very much Less, I appreciate your awesome review. :)

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

The critters take their resting abode beneath the fallen leaves to get their essence of life. This will gone till the end of October. Good musing.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015

Thank you Ola :)