2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "haiku (frozen little hands)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from P.Preston O.A.G.
I like this very much. So much can often be said with very few words. I feel you depicted our world in turmoil today and just one of the tragic side effects of poverty and war. I hope I'm not over thinking it but that's where my heart went when I read it. Great photo choice. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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I like this very much. So much can often be said with very few words. I feel you depicted our world in turmoil today and just one of the tragic side effects of poverty and war. I hope I'm not over thinking it but that's where my heart went when I read it. Great photo choice. Keep it up.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Preston, you are right. I appreciate your awesome review.
Comment from Glasstruth
Children are victims of the adult world of war. The last line is what really adds reality to this. Your words paint a picture that I can see even if you didn't provide one. Well crafted. Les
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Children are victims of the adult world of war. The last line is what really adds reality to this. Your words paint a picture that I can see even if you didn't provide one. Well crafted. Les
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Les, I appreciate your awesome review.
Comment from l.raven
this is so very sad...what did these kids have to eat today????a small poem to say so much...so sad...very well said...luff Linda xoo
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this is so very sad...what did these kids have to eat today????a small poem to say so much...so sad...very well said...luff Linda xoo
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Thank you Linda, I appreciate your awesome review.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo luff