Comment from HKay71

Excellent

Never really thought about zombies gettin it on before, thought they had another eating frenzy in mind. Very creative in taking this subject to a place not many would think of. I applaud your ingenuity. Keep writing my friend! --HKay

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Love your clever review. Hahaha!! Thank you kindly, mikey

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

You can't expect a lively babe if she has been dead for over twenty years. This is disgustingly well written and is a good creative write. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Yep, what was I thinking. I always romanticize them. :)) mikey

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

A pussy that's been dead for years
won't make a lively twat.

oh
em
gee.

this contest has now come to order. lol
or...
not. lol
you and gloria need to stay away from each other. ;)
lol
between you two and craig... how am I to decide? I mean, really?
this just is... wow.
and hers... wow...
and when craig mentioned all those moist extra holes...
yeah, I was like...
*drop the mic*
lol
(not you.. the OTHER kind of mic) ;)
some thoughts...

your high heels and staggered gait are given me some clues
(I think it's 'are giving' or 'have given')

and I cry out, "Oh no!" (this might have a better beat with another "Oh no!" behind it... or ... "I'll blow!"...
and I cry, "oh no! oh no!" (see?) (take 'out' out) lol ? or not. lol)

I take my turn and do my best
but I truly should have thought
a pussy that's been dead for years
won't be a lively twat
(oh no you didn't! LOLOLOL)


(there couldn't be a damn thing in my head worth eating
if I thought it was a good idea to fuck a dead rotting zombie
when I was a decaying rotten zombie my damn self ...)
(any idea why this doesn't rhyme? or is it just a tag along?)

I happen to like the shorter lines, so... yeah. ;)
like, in the middle where you cut them in half...
i like that. but that's me. ;)
well done... and good luck in this very bizarre contest. LOL
Cat

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Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

EEEE-YUCK! (hahahaha) Well, now, I asked for it - I didn't have to click on it, did I? LOL. Yup, it sure enough fits the category/prompt challenge and smacks hell outta it!

S1, L2-
"are givin' me some clues..." OR "giving" (not "given")

Holy sick zombies, what a presentation too! Good luck in the contest. *grin*

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

OMG wow, what a write, damn,
I'm running out of things to say except that it is from the master again and rings with the zombie theme...oh, yes.
Nicely done

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