Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Bedroom Eyes"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
26 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
It comes out nice and smooth, just like song lyrics should. Good repetitions. It would make a darn good country, bluesy kind of song. I wish you luck with it, Brett.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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It comes out nice and smooth, just like song lyrics should. Good repetitions. It would make a darn good country, bluesy kind of song. I wish you luck with it, Brett.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. This one will be shopped around Nashville. So, who knows? Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Serendipity!
Lovely lyrics but so hauntingly sad. I guess that's what folks like to hear now-a-days. That bedspread cover is perfectly awesome. Someone sure has talent! (Ya and patience.)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Lovely lyrics but so hauntingly sad. I guess that's what folks like to hear now-a-days. That bedspread cover is perfectly awesome. Someone sure has talent! (Ya and patience.)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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patcelal did a very good job making that bedspread. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
Wow, what a surprise to open this post and see the picture of my bedspread gracing your lyrics. I enjoyed the read and Glad you found just the right picture to go with it. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Wow, what a surprise to open this post and see the picture of my bedspread gracing your lyrics. I enjoyed the read and Glad you found just the right picture to go with it. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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I could not resist using the picture. You did a super job making that bedspread!!!
Looks like you may have even won a ribbon, or two, for it?
Glad you approve of the lyrics I added to it.
Your comments and support appreciated.
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Yes Brett, I won second best of show, out of over 400 items entered, and best of lot. Both gave me cash awards.
Comment from royowen
They would tak a while to sing, I wrote two songs on took 61/2 minutes to sing and the other on 8min 16 seconds, these would take awhile. But well written, Brett, very creative, beautifully composed, you sure are gifted my friend, if you write good stuff, then you are fGifted,well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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They would tak a while to sing, I wrote two songs on took 61/2 minutes to sing and the other on 8min 16 seconds, these would take awhile. But well written, Brett, very creative, beautifully composed, you sure are gifted my friend, if you write good stuff, then you are fGifted,well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Most welcome Brett
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
I wonder if the boy would listen when his Mama told him about those bedroom eyes, or would the magnetism of those eyes in any case be too much to resist. Lovely song lyrics.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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I wonder if the boy would listen when his Mama told him about those bedroom eyes, or would the magnetism of those eyes in any case be too much to resist. Lovely song lyrics.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated. Knowing me, I probably would not have listened to what she said.
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Don't worry about that my sons did not listen either, though they are happy with their choices
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You are so right when you say it writes itself.
Most of mine I start then let it go where it will.
this was nicely done telling the story of what Mama did not tell but knew he would find out.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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You are so right when you say it writes itself.
Most of mine I start then let it go where it will.
this was nicely done telling the story of what Mama did not tell but knew he would find out.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated. Sure wish I was talented enough to be this creative.
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LOL you are