Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Guilty"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from patcelaw
Brett the message of these lyrics is good. Not sure that the guilty one would be worthy of the guillotine though. Blessings for a good weekend. Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2016
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Brett the message of these lyrics is good. Not sure that the guilty one would be worthy of the guillotine though. Blessings for a good weekend. Patricia
Comment Written 26-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2016
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Not sure of why the guillotine but the song was excellent.
spot on meter and excellent flow that told a story of forbidden love.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Not sure of why the guillotine but the song was excellent.
spot on meter and excellent flow that told a story of forbidden love.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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The guillotine is because that must be what it feels like to be in that position. Married to one and secretly in love with the other. Like your head is on the chopping block any way you turn. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Great song lyrics. We cannot choose who we fall in love, and sometimes the right love comes at the wrong time. The choice is will you stay with your promise or are you going to hurt someone to choose the one you love?
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Great song lyrics. We cannot choose who we fall in love, and sometimes the right love comes at the wrong time. The choice is will you stay with your promise or are you going to hurt someone to choose the one you love?
Comment Written 26-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Comment from William Ross
very good you always carry a great rhythm in your poems weather you have a strict rhyming pattern or not great job and thanks for sharing have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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very good you always carry a great rhythm in your poems weather you have a strict rhyming pattern or not great job and thanks for sharing have a wonderful day
Comment Written 26-Feb-2016
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Comment from JanPerry
It's a lot of fun with the guillotine, the picture sets you up ffrom the get go.
Loving two people is not a bad crime, I'm sure they will set you free! haha
Yes it's important to enjoy your own poems, as I do, also. But I feel the urge
to improve all the time, and watch my words carefully.
I think even a wife would understand your predicament as long as you are honest with her!
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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It's a lot of fun with the guillotine, the picture sets you up ffrom the get go.
Loving two people is not a bad crime, I'm sure they will set you free! haha
Yes it's important to enjoy your own poems, as I do, also. But I feel the urge
to improve all the time, and watch my words carefully.
I think even a wife would understand your predicament as long as you are honest with her!
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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So, you believe having extra marital affairs is okay. That makes you a minority. No woman I ever knew, especially a wife, would tolerate that kind of action out of their husband. Must be a Perth, Australia thing.
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oh I didnt see the affair coming. If I fall in love its from a distance and no one gets hurt. Ok I will have to read it more times then!
Comment from Jeffers63
thanks I really like this work and the strength of your imagery is great. The story tells of a love that someone always seems to be in the wrong. Good vivid writing.
Regards
Jeffers63
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thanks I really like this work and the strength of your imagery is great. The story tells of a love that someone always seems to be in the wrong. Good vivid writing.
Regards
Jeffers63
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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