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Comment from WalkerMan
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! What a delightful dream, nightly to have -- fantasy now but imagining someday reality in this world or another. Who would want to wake from that? Fly on, fly on, by gossamer wings of loving dreams. Gorgeously illustrated too, and well presented on compatible salmon-hued background with black text in italics. If this and your prior one are aimed at the same fortunate person, his kettle has to be at joyful fast boil by now. Your Kyrielle sonnet skills are splendid and advancing steadily. Like the last one, this poem is deserving of publication. Both the first and last stanzas are quote-worthy. Superb.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! What a delightful dream, nightly to have -- fantasy now but imagining someday reality in this world or another. Who would want to wake from that? Fly on, fly on, by gossamer wings of loving dreams. Gorgeously illustrated too, and well presented on compatible salmon-hued background with black text in italics. If this and your prior one are aimed at the same fortunate person, his kettle has to be at joyful fast boil by now. Your Kyrielle sonnet skills are splendid and advancing steadily. Like the last one, this poem is deserving of publication. Both the first and last stanzas are quote-worthy. Superb.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Hi mike! Thank you for this sweet review!! ( i made a mistake..Kryielles have 8 syllables)..who knew? lol i missed this somehow...but was reminded today!! anyway...just going with LOVE POEM!.. I'm happy you liked this one..its special. thanks for the wonderful review!!!
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You are most welcome, Susan. Clearly, your other reviewers, both male and female, like poems of this kind from you too. After all, you are good at it, both technically in putting the poem together, and by choice of a theme that is popular here. -- Mike
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Thank you Michael!!
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You're welcome, Susan. -- Mike
Comment from RGstar
This is nice. There is a natural aura and lyricism here, even for the type of write. It spells natural ability.
You did well here.
Have a great day, author.
my best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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This is nice. There is a natural aura and lyricism here, even for the type of write. It spells natural ability.
You did well here.
Have a great day, author.
my best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Hey you! This is such a sweet review!!! thank you!! :-)))))))) ( that's me smiling)
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You are welcome :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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This is a very beautiful and interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Teri Dear!!! thank you, Always appreciate hearing from you!!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Susan,
This is an amazing sonnet. The art is awesome & so perfect. Your lines flow smoothly 7great rhymes, too.
I am not familiar with the Kyrielle Sonnet. I do see the rhyme pattern & thee repeated lines. Those lines fit in seamlessly. I really like your color scheme.
You did a great job. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Susan,
This is an amazing sonnet. The art is awesome & so perfect. Your lines flow smoothly 7great rhymes, too.
I am not familiar with the Kyrielle Sonnet. I do see the rhyme pattern & thee repeated lines. Those lines fit in seamlessly. I really like your color scheme.
You did a great job. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Jan!! trying so hard to focus my writing!! there is so much to learn!!!! ...thank you for this sweet review!!! hugs
Comment from Dean Kuch
Dreams, fantasies...all are passions and things we often unconsciously seek which often manifest themselves in the form of dreams (sometimes nightmares).
We have no more control over them than we do the beating of our heart.
Nice Kyrielle, Susan...
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Dreams, fantasies...all are passions and things we often unconsciously seek which often manifest themselves in the form of dreams (sometimes nightmares).
We have no more control over them than we do the beating of our heart.
Nice Kyrielle, Susan...
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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DEANO!! HI!!!!!!!!!!!!! no nightmares...ok I love your reviews!!! and look forward to them!! because they make me smile!! :-)))))) and I was thinking of you this morning too....my dog would not let me type on the pc!..he's on my lap begging for my attention!!..so of course i thought of you and gidget!!!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great poem. Scientists are working on a way to let us control our dreams. Before we fall asleep we can choose what we want to dream about and then direct it like a movie as we dream.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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A great poem. Scientists are working on a way to let us control our dreams. Before we fall asleep we can choose what we want to dream about and then direct it like a movie as we dream.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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OH BOY!!!! we may never wake from some of those dreams!!!! thanks for the review!! always appreciate!! :-))))
Comment from DR DIP
I love this I love the repetition of the theme words in each verse very effective
If I had to choose a favourite verse of all favourites:
Should fate require you dwell amidst my dreams
I'll blissfully drift to where love redeems
Enchant my visions duly, every night
Beg, wake me never ~ from my midnight flight.
thanks for sharing my little flowering blossom from the north
Never undersell your poetry you are a beautiful writer with exquisite phrasing I always enjoy reading it
xdip
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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I love this I love the repetition of the theme words in each verse very effective
If I had to choose a favourite verse of all favourites:
Should fate require you dwell amidst my dreams
I'll blissfully drift to where love redeems
Enchant my visions duly, every night
Beg, wake me never ~ from my midnight flight.
thanks for sharing my little flowering blossom from the north
Never undersell your poetry you are a beautiful writer with exquisite phrasing I always enjoy reading it
xdip
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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:-) Thank you Dear Dipster!! 6 stars?? oh you!...Mark, Iv'e fallen in love with this form..poetry...all of it! I'll NEVER be the same...I feel like I am learning so much!!! and all these feelings are just coming through... thank you for your sweet words...flowering blossom? hmmmmm got my mind thinking...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle Sonnet. Each line flows smotly into the next and your rhymes work perfectly. The repeating line is strong and effective.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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A very well-written Kyrielle Sonnet. Each line flows smotly into the next and your rhymes work perfectly. The repeating line is strong and effective.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Sandra!! Dear!! thank you for another wonderful review!!
Comment from Nika2016
This is really nice and portrays a love in fantasy that may not see the light of day, but is still as real or more real than life...itself.
The colors are nice.
Good work...
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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This is really nice and portrays a love in fantasy that may not see the light of day, but is still as real or more real than life...itself.
The colors are nice.
Good work...
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Thank you for such a great review!! much appreciated!
Comment from Venetian2
Is this a Petrarchan sonnet? It's got 14 lines. Is the nocturnal visitor someone you knew, or something kind of supernatural like an angel? Does this poem indicate unsatisfied longing on some level?
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Is this a Petrarchan sonnet? It's got 14 lines. Is the nocturnal visitor someone you knew, or something kind of supernatural like an angel? Does this poem indicate unsatisfied longing on some level?
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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hey you! nothing supernatural....and a woman can have a few secrets huh :-) heheh.. hope all is well
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Women have secrets - that's what makes them mysterious.
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:-) heheh