Once upon the heart..
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Comment from mike1817
Gets a six for excellent rhyming and a full throated evocation of romantic love.
I like the casual start and the immediate plunge into passion. Mike1817
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Gets a six for excellent rhyming and a full throated evocation of romantic love.
I like the casual start and the immediate plunge into passion. Mike1817
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks Mike!! and 6 stars!!!!!! lucky me!!!! i'm smiling!!! :-)))))) ( that's me)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello . susanjohn
I like the message in your well formed poem about getting back together whn you and him were once going their on thier own path when wrote so weel
So, let the world spin on by,
we're no longer going their ways.
Shined on by a star ... brighter memoir;
dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays
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Hello . susanjohn
I like the message in your well formed poem about getting back together whn you and him were once going their on thier own path when wrote so weel
So, let the world spin on by,
we're no longer going their ways.
Shined on by a star ... brighter memoir;
dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays
.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Well Thank you very much!!! appreciate the review!!
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Happy New Year
Gert
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays
Love it as it finishes the piece and brings it to a conclusion.
Very nicely written and heartfelt
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Dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays
Love it as it finishes the piece and brings it to a conclusion.
Very nicely written and heartfelt
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you dear!! Always appreciate your reviews!!
Comment from CEO2020
Nice touch. Especially like -
"Align my heart once again,
and hold my head above water.
Where darkness has been ... breathe life within,
flushed by our glow, becoming much hotter."
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Nice touch. Especially like -
"Align my heart once again,
and hold my head above water.
Where darkness has been ... breathe life within,
flushed by our glow, becoming much hotter."
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks for reading and the review!!
Comment from joeruptak
A really well-written love story
your rhyme rhythm and flow are great
your words managed to take me back about 60 years .
For that I thank you I think anyway you took me there I enjoyed this read very much
thanks
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A really well-written love story
your rhyme rhythm and flow are great
your words managed to take me back about 60 years .
For that I thank you I think anyway you took me there I enjoyed this read very much
thanks
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
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awwww the review can't be sweeter then the poem!!! :-)))) I love this review!! thank you so much...I'm smiling!!! :-)))))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. Sometimes we connect with someone and it doesn't matter where life take us maybe in different directions, we also have this connection with that specific person.
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A very well-written love poem. Sometimes we connect with someone and it doesn't matter where life take us maybe in different directions, we also have this connection with that specific person.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you Sandra!!! Always appreciate your reviews!!
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear susan! the imagery is flowing and breathtaking. the wording is built with metaphors. exquisite my friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
virtual sixer..
rebekka x
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this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear susan! the imagery is flowing and breathtaking. the wording is built with metaphors. exquisite my friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
virtual sixer..
rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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OHHH you're so sweet!!! Thank you for reading and the wonderful review!!!
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the pleasure is entirely mine :)
hugs,
rebekka
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I enjoyed this poem it is a poem of togetherness love and hope for the future and it is beautifully presented I enjoyed well-done regards Jill
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Yes I enjoyed this poem it is a poem of togetherness love and hope for the future and it is beautifully presented I enjoyed well-done regards Jill
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you Jill!!!..I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!!!
Comment from MissMerri
What a beautiful love poem! I especially liked the line, "where darkness has been, breathe life within... " because that's what the arrival of love so often does. But every line of this poem gives clear description of genuine love. It is pure and uncomplicated and lovely. I enjoyed reading it. The internal rhyme made it especially appealing.
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What a beautiful love poem! I especially liked the line, "where darkness has been, breathe life within... " because that's what the arrival of love so often does. But every line of this poem gives clear description of genuine love. It is pure and uncomplicated and lovely. I enjoyed reading it. The internal rhyme made it especially appealing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
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oh thank you dear!!! but i wish i could write like you!!!! :-)
Comment from Heather Knight
What a beautiful poem, Susan! I wish I could write poetry like this. It's very romantic and the language you've used is perfect for this type of composition. Elegant but not obscure.
Thanks for sharing.
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What a beautiful poem, Susan! I wish I could write poetry like this. It's very romantic and the language you've used is perfect for this type of composition. Elegant but not obscure.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
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You know what??? I am sure you can!!! We all express ourselves in different ways...that's the fun part!!! I'll have to check out your work!!! Thank you for such a awesome review!!!