The Piper
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Piper, part 13"Young Adult Fantasy
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Comment from robyn corum
WJ,
A very compelling read. You held my interest the whole way through though this is the first I believe I have read of this story. *smile*
Some notes:
1.) he put his (hand?) on the flute hanging on the cord at his side.
2.) Though there was enough wood (for) a week or
Thanks!
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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WJ,
A very compelling read. You held my interest the whole way through though this is the first I believe I have read of this story. *smile*
Some notes:
1.) he put his (hand?) on the flute hanging on the cord at his side.
2.) Though there was enough wood (for) a week or
Thanks!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review, and especially to read close enough to alert me to the SPAG. I am happy to hear you enjoyed the story.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It's probably a good thing the Fae told him about the music of the flute having magical powers. Looks like they worked. A talking female Wolfe has joined him in the cave.Where's the Fae? Good cliff-hanger Debi. Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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It's probably a good thing the Fae told him about the music of the flute having magical powers. Looks like they worked. A talking female Wolfe has joined him in the cave.Where's the Fae? Good cliff-hanger Debi. Nancy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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HI Nancy,
Thank you for the lovely review and the encouraging six stars! I appreciate the continued support.
Debi