Echoes of Artistry
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "All I Require"NaPoWriMo 2017
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fable and love story. It is all the little things about love and our lovers that we adore about each other that keep us happy. Others opinions have no influence and don't matter.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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A very well-written fable and love story. It is all the little things about love and our lovers that we adore about each other that keep us happy. Others opinions have no influence and don't matter.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi Sandra,
Thank you for the wonderful comments. I wholeheartedly agree. I appreciate your time and your dedicated reviewing.
Kim
Comment from strandregs
Beautiful . Lots of clenching simillies and metaphores
a pleasant pleasure to read.
Joined as one we're stable.
a great ending.:-)) Z.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Beautiful . Lots of clenching simillies and metaphores
a pleasant pleasure to read.
Joined as one we're stable.
a great ending.:-)) Z.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi strandregs,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the comments and smiles.
Kim
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! You did a marvelous job. In many instances, I preferred your stanzas over hers because it was easier to relate to in today's world. In the last stanza, I understand the confirmation of being "joined as one" is clearer to me than her "half a year" which I wasn't sure if she were poking fun at how long man's love could be. Thanks for the educational read on her biography.
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Wow! You did a marvelous job. In many instances, I preferred your stanzas over hers because it was easier to relate to in today's world. In the last stanza, I understand the confirmation of being "joined as one" is clearer to me than her "half a year" which I wasn't sure if she were poking fun at how long man's love could be. Thanks for the educational read on her biography.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi lyenochka,
Thank you for this wonderful review and for requesting to be a fan. This is National Poetry Writing Month and my book is to pay homage to the famous poets who have honed our craft. I'm happy you'll be following along and hope you enjoy the selections.
Kim
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is an AWESOME poem.
Now, if I could just find the perfect soulmate to meet these requirements, I'd feel like I was in Heaven. I need to post this on my wall in a frame.
Excellent choice of title.- 'All I Require'- It grabs the reader's attention.
Great artwork.- Those are lovely portraits.
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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This is an AWESOME poem.
Now, if I could just find the perfect soulmate to meet these requirements, I'd feel like I was in Heaven. I need to post this on my wall in a frame.
Excellent choice of title.- 'All I Require'- It grabs the reader's attention.
Great artwork.- Those are lovely portraits.
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi Nicole,
Thank you for this most wonderful review. Feel free to frame and post on your wall, I would be honored. Your glowing review has made me smile today.
Kim