Comment from bhogg

Excellent

Sure not familiar with this particular format, but looked like you adhered to it and wrote a very pleasant post. Don't really know why, but this made me smile. Perhaps, like you, I was born on a military base, for me, Fukuoka, Japan. Regards, Bill

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2017

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Michael,
I enjoyed your poem. The image is awesome. You did a great job with the style of the memento. Good job on the syllable counts, too. I like the positive feel of your poem & the color scheme.

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Thanks for sharing a well written poem celebrating YOU! Jan

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Aww. Thanks so much, Jan. Yep, filled. LOL I always get it wrong! I'm so pleased you liked it. Kind of tough getting it to flow, but everybody has been up for it I think. Love all your cheerful Easter pictures. You make me smile in spite of myself. :)) mike