Comment from damommy

Excellent

An excellent ABC poem.

Tidying up and watching things around the house as the children play around. I loved it.

"Dear memories we make in pictures we don't take." I really like that line. I see people so busy taking pictures that they don't get to enjoy the moment as it happens.

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017

Hi Yvonne,

Thanks for taking the time to read and review this one. I've come to the conclusion that I have the next day to clean. It is better to enjoy the kids and the day and spend time with the family making memories. I appreciate all of your comments. That was my favorite line, too!

Kim

reply by damommy on 18-Apr-2017

You're so right to do it that way. Cleaning can wait while you're making memories.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Kim. I really enjoyed reading your suite of ABC stanza poems. Wonderful. Good sentiments expressed here. My house looked like this before I dared to neaten it up for Easter. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017

Hi Marilyn:

I can usually find something much better to do than cleaning (writing lol) But, when the kids come over for a holiday, the next day I have to make the time to clean up. That way everyone enjoys the holiday and we memories (and messes.) But, the food was delicious! :) Thank you for the fun review!

Kim