Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

dip,
This was a fun poem. You did a great job with the rhyme & smooth flow of your words. Your descriptions were great about the real haiku. They are difficult to review for me, too.

I believe both will enjoy this poem & not be upset.

Us poets hacks with our sonnets and rhymes

Should the word 'we' be used instead of us and no 's' on the word hacks? Just asking.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Thanks Jan I was a bit worried initially they would find it offensive but I certainly wrote it with tongue firmly implanted in cheek lol

dip