Comment from Liberty Justice

Exceptional

SIX STARS for you dear poet, RECONCILED. Indeed, your poem is so mesmerizing and inspiring. Alliteration and personification runs deeply in this amazing poet as the background colors and font and photo add to the power of your poem. lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017

Hello Liberty...I love that name it reminds me of freedom...smile-
why thank you I am beside myself out of body experiencing allll this...its amazing absolutly amazing...thank you thank you...love Michael

reply by Liberty Justice on 30-Apr-2017

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Comment from Cmelton

Excellent

I like the rhyming inside sentences. It gives it a great flow. I like your choice of words as well. It makes you think and really get into the meaning behind the poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

why thank you...yes it makes it melodious to read. I learned that here. Appreciate the headnod....love Michael

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

You are speaking about the unseen is my impression. A whole world unnoticed but can be with the right person. It calls using love. This is some deep and sensitive writing. It requires you to come with a quiet mind in order to appreciate its freshness. Very nice.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Hey Man...-smile-...why I thank you and though i usually leave interpretation to the readers experience....here I'm Actually speaking about the very apparent.
in the gifted ability of another poet and friend. a woman who blesses us all here regularly with her poetic prowess. but again I'm glad you enjoyed. love Michael

reply by pbomar1115 on 30-Apr-2017

Man, you are deep. You're welcome.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello reconciled
What pleasant poem to read about your friend and to those who love God to me has a nice peaceful tone
Thank you for sharing

Gert

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Hey Gert...-smile-
How are you sweet Lady...?
ah well shes a pleasure thats for sure. thanks glad you enjoyed. love Michael

reply by Gert sherwood on 30-Apr-2017

Thank you Michael for asking me how I'm doing it's a sweet question to ask.
Hope to read a posting from you
Gert

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi my friend,

Again you have written a very nice poem. Thanks for sharing it with me.
I enjoyed reading it and I loved the pictures that you used with them.
Have a good day!

Kat

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 01-May-2017

Hello Beautiful...-smile-....thank you I appreciate the visit...always by you. love Michael

reply by MizKat on 01-May-2017

Thanks for saying I'm beautiful.
You always did say nice things like that.
Kat

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

This is a very nice poem.
The wording is strong.
This speaks volume: 'she speaks in love poems
side by side with God'
Outstanding artwork: Love the image; it supports the writing.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 01-May-2017

Hi Nicole...-smile-.....I thank you kindly....very happy you enjoyed it...but Ive probably changed it somewhat by now. I tweak after I post....its my way giving back...-smile-....love Michael