Once upon the heart..
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I dont remember the name of the form you used but it works so well with the repitition of the the lines you chose to make it stronger.
'Resisting never, strong arms holding tight'
a dream of everyone
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reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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I dont remember the name of the form you used but it works so well with the repitition of the the lines you chose to make it stronger.
'Resisting never, strong arms holding tight'
a dream of everyone
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Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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A Villanelle. :-) thank you for reading!!...and for the wonderful review!!!
Comment from WalkerMan
Once more you prove your skill at writing splendid love poems, putting lovely words to fantasies many have of finding new love in a chance meeting to escape from dull and lonely times into hope of a bright future of togetherness. Superb, and aptly illustrated.
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Once more you prove your skill at writing splendid love poems, putting lovely words to fantasies many have of finding new love in a chance meeting to escape from dull and lonely times into hope of a bright future of togetherness. Superb, and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you Mike for yet another wonderful review! I appreciate your continued encouragement!
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You are most welcome, Susan. No one else here turns out one beautiful love poem after another the way you do. -- Mike
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awe..that got me. :-)
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It's true, and no one would dispute it. :))
Comment from DR DIP
A beautiful romance poem Susan I especially like it because it has dip in it..Seren'dip'ity lol. You are a beautiful writer of romance Susan and it shows in every romance write.
xxdip
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A beautiful romance poem Susan I especially like it because it has dip in it..Seren'dip'ity lol. You are a beautiful writer of romance Susan and it shows in every romance write.
xxdip
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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You sweetheart you!...You always make me smile! ( sorry, haven't been reviewing much...hoping to get some time soon)..take care dipster! :-)
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a lovely poem you've penned.
'Moonlight Dancers'- Great title.
It has rhyme and it flows.
Outstanding artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem and title. It's beautiful.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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This is a lovely poem you've penned.
'Moonlight Dancers'- Great title.
It has rhyme and it flows.
Outstanding artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem and title. It's beautiful.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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What a sweet review!! thank you so much!