Autumn
The season is personified.26 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about autumn in action; poet can find the colours, fragrances everywhere around; it is likeable and poet is not prepared to leave this season in comparison; I liked.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This speaks about autumn in action; poet can find the colours, fragrances everywhere around; it is likeable and poet is not prepared to leave this season in comparison; I liked.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed your romp with Ms. Autumn. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Irish Rain
This is just WONDERFUL. I loved every line. Autumn is my favorite season, and this autumn artist has painted it beautifully!! This is a winner! Blessings...
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This is just WONDERFUL. I loved every line. Autumn is my favorite season, and this autumn artist has painted it beautifully!! This is a winner! Blessings...
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I am thrilled you enjoyed this poem so much and I truly appreciate your encouraging endorsement.
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Just got my vote!!
Comment from poetwatch
Very good. You danced with the tree as it fill the park with its colorful and lovely shower of fallen leaves. This is a very good contest entry. I have never heard of a Campion poem, but then again all I do is write. Good luck on the contest.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Very good. You danced with the tree as it fill the park with its colorful and lovely shower of fallen leaves. This is a very good contest entry. I have never heard of a Campion poem, but then again all I do is write. Good luck on the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I had never heard of a Campion either until I read Berg's book. This was initially written as an experiment and then I just kept working at it. So pleased you like it.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a true work of art - words imaginative and highly descriptive, movement lyrical and fluid - beautifully written, and, in my opinion, the obvious winner in this contest - best of luck in this regard...
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In my opinion, a true work of art - words imaginative and highly descriptive, movement lyrical and fluid - beautifully written, and, in my opinion, the obvious winner in this contest - best of luck in this regard...
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I am extremely pleased you like my poem so much and truly appreciate your kind praise and endorsement. That gold star is a wonderful bonus. Thank you!
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You are very welcome, my pleasure - thank you for a superb read...
Comment from royowen
I rather like this work, although in strict form, (I'm not sure the judges will favour this, but good luck) I still think this is skilfully and imaginatively crafted with an articulate, well crafted form, (perhaps leave out the author notes), well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I rather like this work, although in strict form, (I'm not sure the judges will favour this, but good luck) I still think this is skilfully and imaginatively crafted with an articulate, well crafted form, (perhaps leave out the author notes), well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Roy, for sharing mypoemand your sage advice. I don't know how the the Contest Review Committee will define Free Verse.
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Probably anything not strict form or rhyme, good luck, Roy
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I did not hear from them, and the voting has begun. Rod
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That's good Rod. Good luck my friend.
Comment from B.B. Rose
Lovely, and the poetic form was achieved without strain. Thanks for the book's name. Definitely one to add to my growing collection as I try to learn to write poetry after years away for other things (earning a living). You show marvelous artistry like your autumnal character. B.B. Rose
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Lovely, and the poetic form was achieved without strain. Thanks for the book's name. Definitely one to add to my growing collection as I try to learn to write poetry after years away for other things (earning a living). You show marvelous artistry like your autumnal character. B.B. Rose
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much, B. B. Rose. You've made my day with your exuberant praise of my Campion. That bonus gold star is much appreciated, too. You will love Berg's book which is still available on Amazon.