A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully written, Craig! I especially liked the line where you used the new word :
"Yet noctilucy is dispersed by light-polluted fog"
Yes, it's so sad that city lights take away from the beauty of the night sky and we can't see the noctilucy.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Beautifully written, Craig! I especially liked the line where you used the new word :
"Yet noctilucy is dispersed by light-polluted fog"
Yes, it's so sad that city lights take away from the beauty of the night sky and we can't see the noctilucy.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thanks very much for the lovely comments, Helen. They're most appreciated - Craig
Comment from Ash Bleu
"the dazzling blanket up above, the jewel-encrusted sky,
the meteors and comets as they silently race by"
Those lines were beautifully written. Loved the description and lovely rhyme. Thank you for teaching me a new word as well!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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"the dazzling blanket up above, the jewel-encrusted sky,
the meteors and comets as they silently race by"
Those lines were beautifully written. Loved the description and lovely rhyme. Thank you for teaching me a new word as well!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the very kind words. I appreciate them, and am glad you liked the poem. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
This one took me aback, it was so visual and vivid, the picture you used went perfectly and only added to the imagery, I wouldn't be able to say enough good things about it ð???ð??»ð???ð??»
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This one took me aback, it was so visual and vivid, the picture you used went perfectly and only added to the imagery, I wouldn't be able to say enough good things about it ð???ð??»ð???ð??»
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thanks for the kind comments - most gratefully received, Craig
Comment from Donka Kristeva
I could feel the calmness and serenity of the night." the jewel encrusted sky", the nocturnal spider. Such nights are inspiring and feeding our hunger for inner stillness and beauty. I enjoyed your poem
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I could feel the calmness and serenity of the night." the jewel encrusted sky", the nocturnal spider. Such nights are inspiring and feeding our hunger for inner stillness and beauty. I enjoyed your poem
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the lovely comments, much appreciated - Craig
Comment from BeasPeas
"Noctilucy!" Very good word. I enjoyed reading your rhyming poem which describes the natural light of the night sky versus the street lights of the city. Nicely composed. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
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"Noctilucy!" Very good word. I enjoyed reading your rhyming poem which describes the natural light of the night sky versus the street lights of the city. Nicely composed. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Many thanks for the kind words, Marilyn, and the good wishes. Both are much appreciated - Craig