Enriqueta Marti Vampire of Barcelona
The devils daughter24 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
Another great historically based poem, well written and immensely fascinating. These are stories I would have never heard of if not for your intense research and talent for story telling. I plan on buying your book as soon as it comes out. Thanks so much, I look forward to more.
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Another great historically based poem, well written and immensely fascinating. These are stories I would have never heard of if not for your intense research and talent for story telling. I plan on buying your book as soon as it comes out. Thanks so much, I look forward to more.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thankyou for your patience. I started it four hours ago and I have only just finished it. I shall probably suffer nightmares in that way it has been one of my most challenging poems, few freak me out but this one really did. Thanks so much for your interest in my book, kindest regards Meia xx
Comment from Lady Jane
Wow, another deeply disturbing piece of poetic insight and perfection, Meia... The story reminded me of Hitler...he did the same thing with the skin and bones of not just children, put parents, and surrounded himself with his 'trophies.' I cannot believe men, let alone women, can think to do such atrocious things, let alone implement them to fruition without getting caught sooner. Sigh. Darkness, just evil. You wrote about it fluidly with excellent rhyme and meter. Thanks for sharing this dark installment, LOL.
Janelle
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Wow, another deeply disturbing piece of poetic insight and perfection, Meia... The story reminded me of Hitler...he did the same thing with the skin and bones of not just children, put parents, and surrounded himself with his 'trophies.' I cannot believe men, let alone women, can think to do such atrocious things, let alone implement them to fruition without getting caught sooner. Sigh. Darkness, just evil. You wrote about it fluidly with excellent rhyme and meter. Thanks for sharing this dark installment, LOL.
Janelle
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thankyou for your patience. I started it four hours ago and I have only just finished it. I shall probably suffer nightmares in that way it has been one of my most challenging poems, few freak me out but this one really did. Thanks so much for your interest in my book, kindest regards Meia xx
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It's hard to believe the depraved monsters that exist. I wonder how many people we pass every day who are harboring dark secrets. It makes my blood run cold.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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It's hard to believe the depraved monsters that exist. I wonder how many people we pass every day who are harboring dark secrets. It makes my blood run cold.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thankyou for your patience. I started it four hours ago and I have only just finished it. I shall probably suffer nightmares in that way it has been one of my most challenging poems, few freak me out but this one really did. thanks so much for the amazing six kindest regards Meia xx
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Lord, Meia!
Totally barbaric and gruesome!
But what a fascinating read! How utterly deplorable that a person like this could exist! And you write that she may have murdered "hundreds?" There has to be a special place in hell for a monster like Enriqueta. And to think that the police and wealthy turned blind eyes towards her...unbelievable...
One small nit:
The list of her victims and her clients were (was) found = "list" is the subject; thus it must take a singular verb. Also "of her victims and her clients " = prepositional phrase = not the subject.
Thank you ever so much for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Good Lord, Meia!
Totally barbaric and gruesome!
But what a fascinating read! How utterly deplorable that a person like this could exist! And you write that she may have murdered "hundreds?" There has to be a special place in hell for a monster like Enriqueta. And to think that the police and wealthy turned blind eyes towards her...unbelievable...
One small nit:
The list of her victims and her clients were (was) found = "list" is the subject; thus it must take a singular verb. Also "of her victims and her clients " = prepositional phrase = not the subject.
Thank you ever so much for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thankyou for your patience. I started it four hours ago and I have only just finished it. I shall probably suffer nightmares in that way it has been one of my most challenging poems, few freak me out but this one really did. Thanks so much for your help I translated a lot from the Spanish and I have found yet more errors reading through, I am getting there bless you for your help and shining six!, kindest regards Meia xxx