Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very well written poem that said so much. I do not like guts and gore poems or stories these days. I used to love scary movies, but not now. This was a nice poem you have penned. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This was hilarious! The rhymes were tight, it made sense, and I got a chuckle out of it. Hopefully Dean Dean doesn't do this to you every time. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Earl

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I thought that was so funny!! You're right, this one made me chuckle not scream in terror! But, I do prefer to laugh, it's so much nicer. Well done, I'm sure you will do well on the funny side of Halloween. Good luck! :) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks, Sandra