Where There's Love
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Comment from QC Poet
Strange dream, if true seems her love or a fear of leaving her alone pulled you back. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight into this interesting topic on a Love poem prompt entry.
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Strange dream, if true seems her love or a fear of leaving her alone pulled you back. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight into this interesting topic on a Love poem prompt entry.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about love and an experience of the spirit leaving the body to look down on our natural bodies and lives. I did not have any of these experiences myself but I heard from others who it also happened to.
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A very well-written poem about love and an experience of the spirit leaving the body to look down on our natural bodies and lives. I did not have any of these experiences myself but I heard from others who it also happened to.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
Comment from Possummagic
This is an interesting poem and especially if you are not emotionally unwell. I had a similar experience many years ago whilst suffering from depression. My psychiatrist explained that it occurs when the mind is too unwell to deal with the prevalent issues, we appear to be outside our body, in my case I was standing to the left of my body. It's the minds way of protecting itself from harmful thoughts.... or you just had an out of body experience for no known reason. But you were unharmed. PM
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This is an interesting poem and especially if you are not emotionally unwell. I had a similar experience many years ago whilst suffering from depression. My psychiatrist explained that it occurs when the mind is too unwell to deal with the prevalent issues, we appear to be outside our body, in my case I was standing to the left of my body. It's the minds way of protecting itself from harmful thoughts.... or you just had an out of body experience for no known reason. But you were unharmed. PM
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have heard of these out of body experiences that some people have and as long as you can get back into your body then I expect they are harmless and yours seems like a positive loving incident, well described and I felt I was floating with you here, love Dolly x
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I have heard of these out of body experiences that some people have and as long as you can get back into your body then I expect they are harmless and yours seems like a positive loving incident, well described and I felt I was floating with you here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Where there is love, growth and prosperity happen and not disaster and nightmare even which stands a warning and caution if love is lost; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Where there is love, growth and prosperity happen and not disaster and nightmare even which stands a warning and caution if love is lost; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
Comment from Randa Dayle
Love writing prompt! What an interesting poem about love!! You certainly have one that rhymes. I wish you luck in the contest and continue to share! Thanks!
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Love writing prompt! What an interesting poem about love!! You certainly have one that rhymes. I wish you luck in the contest and continue to share! Thanks!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
Comment from Donka Kristeva
..."where there is love..." Interesting, supernatural experience well described. The poem's lesson is that love is always present... embracing us.
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..."where there is love..." Interesting, supernatural experience well described. The poem's lesson is that love is always present... embracing us.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Willie,
Awww, this is such a sweet love poem. I really like your ending, as it ties the whole piece together into a tidy little contest package. What you have described sounds like astral projection, I suppose. Intriguing. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
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Hi Willie,
Awww, this is such a sweet love poem. I really like your ending, as it ties the whole piece together into a tidy little contest package. What you have described sounds like astral projection, I suppose. Intriguing. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
Comment from LisaMay
This is beautiful; to think that you can be so moved to fly right out of your body with love. Your poem flows well and takes the reader along with the writer to seek an answer to your strange experience, and then realising that the answer is close at hand, resting her head on your shoulder.
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This is beautiful; to think that you can be so moved to fly right out of your body with love. Your poem flows well and takes the reader along with the writer to seek an answer to your strange experience, and then realising that the answer is close at hand, resting her head on your shoulder.
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2019