Dreams and Wishes
Lune Poetry24 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Great sentiments expressed in three short lines. Dreams and wishes do need to be nourished like a seed surrounded by hope. Well said. Very inspiring.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Great sentiments expressed in three short lines. Dreams and wishes do need to be nourished like a seed surrounded by hope. Well said. Very inspiring.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thanks so much, June. I am glad you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is very inspirational, thought provoking, and well thought out. I love the very clever way you tied it all together with and through hope. Thanks for sharing this skillfully written work. Well done!
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This is very inspirational, thought provoking, and well thought out. I love the very clever way you tied it all together with and through hope. Thanks for sharing this skillfully written work. Well done!
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you very much, Jeffrey!
Melissa
Comment from Irish Rain
So lovely.
Also very true, without hope
there'd be no point.
With hope, the possibilities are
endless. Wonderful entry!
Blessings...
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reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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So lovely.
Also very true, without hope
there'd be no point.
With hope, the possibilities are
endless. Wonderful entry!
Blessings...
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Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
Thank you very much, Judy. Hope is so important.
Melissa
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Hope is everything!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Just that one word -womb- made this an excellent poem because it gives such a unique slant to what you're conveying. Honestly, Melissa, your work NEVER disappoints. Good luck in the contest. xo
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Just that one word -womb- made this an excellent poem because it gives such a unique slant to what you're conveying. Honestly, Melissa, your work NEVER disappoints. Good luck in the contest. xo
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Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Rachelle. I am delighted you liked it and gave me such wonderful comments. hugs.
Melissa
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It was my pleasure, Melissa. xo