Time Management
Overachievers R Us!30 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I was worn out by the time I read this poem!! You've just described my life, and at least 50% of the authors on here. Written down it looks good, arn't we busy bees? Well done, you did a fine job with this contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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I was worn out by the time I read this poem!! You've just described my life, and at least 50% of the authors on here. Written down it looks good, arn't we busy bees? Well done, you did a fine job with this contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Bzzzz, bzzzz. Yes, we are!! Thank you for your lovely review!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a clever picture of one's daily agenda by lives in general, clearly demonstrating that all life is similar in day to day responsibilities and effort - striking and philosophical in both delivery and presentation - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a clever picture of one's daily agenda by lives in general, clearly demonstrating that all life is similar in day to day responsibilities and effort - striking and philosophical in both delivery and presentation - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you for this nice review, Eve!
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You are welcome, but just for the record, not intending to be nice - this is my honest opinion, as are all my reviews...Eve
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Okay.
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Amen...
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done - and it flows right into the opposite of the beginning word. Flows logically. After all that exercise, I know how it feels. At the coast last week I walked more than usual - wow - sure felt it.
Nice poem.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Well done - and it flows right into the opposite of the beginning word. Flows logically. After all that exercise, I know how it feels. At the coast last week I walked more than usual - wow - sure felt it.
Nice poem.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Yes, nothing like exercise to realize how much more you need if you want to consider yourself 'in shape.'
Thanks for the nice review, Gail.
Comment from Michele Harber
Oh my goodness, I got tired just reading your schedule. I would not necessarily have considered "unconscious" the antonym of "busy" but, considering all the items on your list, there may be no middle ground. Your poem is cute and lighthearted, and I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Oh my goodness, I got tired just reading your schedule. I would not necessarily have considered "unconscious" the antonym of "busy" but, considering all the items on your list, there may be no middle ground. Your poem is cute and lighthearted, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you. I appreciate that very much, Michele!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from victor 66
Yup, I can't think of anything more you could add to your antonym poem that would describe the members of this writing site any better. Most impressive. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Yup, I can't think of anything more you could add to your antonym poem that would describe the members of this writing site any better. Most impressive. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks very much, Victor!
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You are most welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from Mistydawn
Lol, that sums up my day quite nicely. Trying to get my writing done and keep my household duties in order. Then hubby wonders why I'm so tired at the end of the day, hmm I wonder. It's very well-written, interesting start to finish. One I'm sure many of us can relate to, Good luck with your contest
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Lol, that sums up my day quite nicely. Trying to get my writing done and keep my household duties in order. Then hubby wonders why I'm so tired at the end of the day, hmm I wonder. It's very well-written, interesting start to finish. One I'm sure many of us can relate to, Good luck with your contest
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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I appreciate this very much, Mistydawn. Thanks.
Comment from rspoet
You've written a very busy poem for the antonym contest
with an interesting choice of words.
Many on fanstory will relate to your long list of words and conclusion.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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You've written a very busy poem for the antonym contest
with an interesting choice of words.
Many on fanstory will relate to your long list of words and conclusion.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks, Robert! I appreciate the encouragement here very much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good choice of antonyms!
-I like the formatting of your poem.
-You give lots of good examples
of all of the things
you do; it makes one tired
thinking about it all-
working, weeding, writing,
cleaning, posting, and more!
-Effective use of the '-w' sound.
-A very good concluding word, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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-Good choice of antonyms!
-I like the formatting of your poem.
-You give lots of good examples
of all of the things
you do; it makes one tired
thinking about it all-
working, weeding, writing,
cleaning, posting, and more!
-Effective use of the '-w' sound.
-A very good concluding word, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks, Pam. This review was the first I read after returning to consciousness, and I'm glad about that!
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You are welcome, and I appreciate your reply. It will be interesting to see who you are, MW, aka, Mystery Writer!
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; )
Comment from dmt1967
It sounds like my day lol. This poem will relate to everyone on this site lol. I like the end as that really does relate to me lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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It sounds like my day lol. This poem will relate to everyone on this site lol. I like the end as that really does relate to me lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you for this positive feedback! I appreciate it. (And thanks for being conscious long enough to review it!)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written antonym poem about the busy people in life that work hard every day and often feel they are not getting anywhere, but the get further anyway than the ones who are unconscious.
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A very well-written antonym poem about the busy people in life that work hard every day and often feel they are not getting anywhere, but the get further anyway than the ones who are unconscious.
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Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Well, now, THAT is a hard point to argue, for SURE!!! Thanks for a delightful review, Sandra.