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Comment from Wanda Faith Sewell
It can be a hard cynical world we live in for sure. The effects of growing up are expressed very well in this poem. Then coping comes through well in hobbies and crafts and relations with the family. Enjoyed.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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It can be a hard cynical world we live in for sure. The effects of growing up are expressed very well in this poem. Then coping comes through well in hobbies and crafts and relations with the family. Enjoyed.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Yep, those are the things that allow us to keep our sanity. Thanks for the kind words :) Craig
Comment from kahpot
Well you have got me, this is an excellent poem, read, on the woes of this world, and no matter what we say and try we are left with trying to escape it all, "no them and us on our school bus" how things have changed for the worse and you have summed it up wonderfully, woodwork is as good therapy as any, make toys-not guns****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Well you have got me, this is an excellent poem, read, on the woes of this world, and no matter what we say and try we are left with trying to escape it all, "no them and us on our school bus" how things have changed for the worse and you have summed it up wonderfully, woodwork is as good therapy as any, make toys-not guns****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the delightful rating and wonderful comments. Your encouragement is very much appreciated. Craig
Comment from royowen
I think you've devised the best solution to what ails the earth and its inhabitants. Depart to your "man cave" this was a great read, albeit a stream of consciousness we are all prone to. The rhythmic ballad meter was perfect in rhythm,, the theme(s) articulate and fetching, a pleasure to read. Well done, blessings, Roy
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I think you've devised the best solution to what ails the earth and its inhabitants. Depart to your "man cave" this was a great read, albeit a stream of consciousness we are all prone to. The rhythmic ballad meter was perfect in rhythm,, the theme(s) articulate and fetching, a pleasure to read. Well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for the delightful comments, Roy. I find it hard to contemplate not having my hideout. Cheers, Craig
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Welcome Craig