Always Another Line
Don't try to find the words, let them find you...42 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What a lovely three line poem you've written here Yvette, with a marvellous theme, Perceptive and well worded, with economic language as your weapon, well done, good job, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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What a lovely three line poem you've written here Yvette, with a marvellous theme, Perceptive and well worded, with economic language as your weapon, well done, good job, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for this awesome review, Sir Roy -- so very appreciated!! ;) :) Take care over/down there! ;) Yvette
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Welcome Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery, alliteration,
and personification.
-There are so many things
that "sing to the poet's pen."
-This is one of them!
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery, alliteration,
and personification.
-There are so many things
that "sing to the poet's pen."
-This is one of them!
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for this wonderful review, Pam -- I do so very much appreciate your support! ;) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette, and have a good rest of your week, too.
Comment from Gail Denham
That's sure true - one reads many sorrowful "lost love" poems or hurting stories of sad events in the life. And that must be helpful, soothing to write of these things.
nice poem
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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That's sure true - one reads many sorrowful "lost love" poems or hurting stories of sad events in the life. And that must be helpful, soothing to write of these things.
nice poem
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for your review here, Gail -- so very appreciated, ma'am! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from LisaMay
The 'other line' encompasses the darker, more fraught side of life that rises unbidden to our minds and needs expression. Happy is easy; we are saddled with sad.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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The 'other line' encompasses the darker, more fraught side of life that rises unbidden to our minds and needs expression. Happy is easy; we are saddled with sad.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Definitely!! ;) :) Thanx so much for your review here, L-M -- so very appreciated, ma'am! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the things that can inspire us varied from shattered dreams to joyous events that make our hearts rejoice with joy.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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A very well-written three-line poem about the things that can inspire us varied from shattered dreams to joyous events that make our hearts rejoice with joy.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for your review here, Sandra -- so very appreciated, ma'am! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bucketlist
This brevity of this poem as presented, does not detract from the powerful message. It is a cathartic method of sharing emotions for many a writer, without renting an office couch!!! I love the line
"sing songs to the poet's pen..."
Thanks for sharing, and good luck
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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This brevity of this poem as presented, does not detract from the powerful message. It is a cathartic method of sharing emotions for many a writer, without renting an office couch!!! I love the line
"sing songs to the poet's pen..."
Thanks for sharing, and good luck
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Wow -- what a wonderful way to start the afternoon (after morning classes!), Trisha ... you've given me a smile to make it through this grading with...LOL!! ;) :) I am so very glad this one touched you -- how often is our writing our therapy?! ;) :) Thank you for the wonderful review and for those shiny stars!! ;) :) Take care up there -- Yvette :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Some of the best poems come from shattered dreams. Love the allusion to lyrics singing through the poet's pen.
Excellent entry into the contest.
Enjoyed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Some of the best poems come from shattered dreams. Love the allusion to lyrics singing through the poet's pen.
Excellent entry into the contest.
Enjoyed.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for your review here, Gloria -- so very appreciated, ma'am! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored this write Yvette and you stole another of my sixes here, we poet's tend to write about love and also sorrow without any qualms, recording life in words for others to identify with, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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I adored this write Yvette and you stole another of my sixes here, we poet's tend to write about love and also sorrow without any qualms, recording life in words for others to identify with, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Oh my goodness, Dolly -- this is such an awesome surprise and the best sunshine to add to the day!! ;) Thanx so much for these stars and for such a lovely review...I'll be smiling into the weekend! ;) Take care over there, ma'am! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome Yvette x x x
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a well written short poem which fits the contest guidelines. The words "shattered" and "fractured" create a mood within the piece. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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This is a well written short poem which fits the contest guidelines. The words "shattered" and "fractured" create a mood within the piece. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx much for your review, Susan -- much appreciated. :) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
Yes even the sad can bring out words of feeling, which sometimes seem to have more power than the happy-unfortunately, but I think our emotions are a good inspiration for the pen, very well written in so few words with great artwork to enhance, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Yes even the sad can bring out words of feeling, which sometimes seem to have more power than the happy-unfortunately, but I think our emotions are a good inspiration for the pen, very well written in so few words with great artwork to enhance, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Those negative feelings certainly do seem to take a tighter hold on us, don't they?! ;) :) But writing tends to be a pretty good therapy sometimes! ;) Thanx for the review, sir -- take care! ;) Yvette