The Piper
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
took a long drink form his water-skin (from)
Than I can grab you. (then)
Which ones were Pipers? (Piper's)
A few spags, but an interesting chapter to this story, my friend~Debbie
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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took a long drink form his water-skin (from)
Than I can grab you. (then)
Which ones were Pipers? (Piper's)
A few spags, but an interesting chapter to this story, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Hi Debbie,
Thank you for taking time to read and give me some suggestions for improvement. I appreciate it.