The French Letter
Viewing comments for Chapter 89 "The Graveyard Nightjar"A Novel
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hellen transforms herself into the harbinger of death, the angel of revenge just in case if she will ever meet the person who killed her parents. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Hellen transforms herself into the harbinger of death, the angel of revenge just in case if she will ever meet the person who killed her parents. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Iza. I appreciate your dropping by to review this chapter. Thanks for your support. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Mistydawn
Well, at least he knows the real mission, the danger and her reasoning behind it. Hopefully, he'll be somewhat prepared for what'll happen next. The chapter is well-written, very interesting. Your characters seem real, believable I look forward to the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Well, at least he knows the real mission, the danger and her reasoning behind it. Hopefully, he'll be somewhat prepared for what'll happen next. The chapter is well-written, very interesting. Your characters seem real, believable I look forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks very much for your support, Misty. I appreciate your comments and your interest. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Gloria ....
Hmmm, lots of delicious and sensuous imagery in this chapter. The two pink elephants intrigued me instantly.
Clever and most romantic banter between the two. Understated always works to best effect in my opinion.
Ha, great ending too. Your novel is simmering quite nicely. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Hmmm, lots of delicious and sensuous imagery in this chapter. The two pink elephants intrigued me instantly.
Clever and most romantic banter between the two. Understated always works to best effect in my opinion.
Ha, great ending too. Your novel is simmering quite nicely. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Gloria. I appreciate your encouraging words and the sixth star. Most generous, This simmering novel is taking quite a while to come to the boil. Methinks I shall have turn the heat up! All good wishes, Tony
Comment from lyenochka
What a fascinating sound for a bird (nightjar) to be making! I like your very clever use of the sound at the end. I'm glad that the air is cleared between the two and we know what the plan is. But hoping that they will survive!
One typo:
"eventually lrft the building," (left?)
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What a fascinating sound for a bird (nightjar) to be making! I like your very clever use of the sound at the end. I'm glad that the air is cleared between the two and we know what the plan is. But hoping that they will survive!
One typo:
"eventually lrft the building," (left?)
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks for picking up the typo, Helen. I must get into the habit of using a larger font when I'm drafting my work. The old eyes aren't quite what they used to be!
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I always use 20 pt so I can see. I think all of us are suffering with some eye issue.