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Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "Dawn in the Hindu Kush"A Novel
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Comment from Sankey
Well done. A great chapter. For some strange reason, I missed the last chapter so now I don't get any points for my review which I will do in a sec. No spags and very dramatic as usual.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Well done. A great chapter. For some strange reason, I missed the last chapter so now I don't get any points for my review which I will do in a sec. No spags and very dramatic as usual.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Very many thanks, Geoffrey, for your kind words and the sixth star. Most kind. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Cindy Warren
Well, they can't very well stay where they are, so Helen's plan is going to have to work. As long as everyone thinks they're dead, nobody will be looking for them. They should be able to travel a few miles at night, if they're lucky.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Well, they can't very well stay where they are, so Helen's plan is going to have to work. As long as everyone thinks they're dead, nobody will be looking for them. They should be able to travel a few miles at night, if they're lucky.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Cindy. I appreciate your review and comments. It could be a difficult journey. I hope they get through all right. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, A very well written and intriguing story that I know will keep readers turning the pages rather than turning out the lights. I am amazed that you already have so many characters lined up and waiting to be inserted into the narrative, and have, in this segment, demonstrated how skillfully you you can do it.
I hope you will be writing for many years to come.
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Dear Author, A very well written and intriguing story that I know will keep readers turning the pages rather than turning out the lights. I am amazed that you already have so many characters lined up and waiting to be inserted into the narrative, and have, in this segment, demonstrated how skillfully you you can do it.
I hope you will be writing for many years to come.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Suzanna. I appreciate your review and very kind comments. This novel is in its final stages. Most of the characters have already come and gone, though some may yet reappear. Who knows? Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Ricky1024
This short script was well-written and it was rich in theme and imagery.
It flowed well it read well and I could find no grammar issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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This short script was well-written and it was rich in theme and imagery.
It flowed well it read well and I could find no grammar issues.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Ricky. I appreciate your review and comments. Best wishes, Tony