Love Letter on a Clipboard #4
Response To My Secret Admirer #331 total reviews
Comment from WalkerMan
In this fourth letter, the hitherto anonymous admirer pours his heart out, revealing his "deepest sorrows, fears, and longings" based on his prior experience with what he once thought was love, but turned out to be deception by a gold digger who harmed him both financially and emotionally.
He then goes on to explain how Kristin's spontaneous minor act of kindness brought him hope after of years of sad loneliness. He emphatically repeats his declaration of love, and praises Kristin's unconditional willingness to accept him.
Finally, he reveals the connections which made anonymous access to her clipboard possible, reveals his identity, explains that Captain Lewis is his father (who adores her too), and leaves her (presumably on CD) a love song his parents loved, in hope Kristin will love it too.
In centuries past, before the telephone and fast travel, many courtships were successfully conducted through handwritten letters. (I still have the many letters my late wife and I exchanged when we were apart one summer, over a year before we married; and I know you still have letters you and Jackson wrote to each other.) Thus, it is refreshing in our present cynical age to see such a delightfully sincere, old-fashioned courtship conducted through the written word.
Let the doubters have their say, but I like it. Superb, beautifully illustrated with the pink rose, and aptly accompanied by the chosen song.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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In this fourth letter, the hitherto anonymous admirer pours his heart out, revealing his "deepest sorrows, fears, and longings" based on his prior experience with what he once thought was love, but turned out to be deception by a gold digger who harmed him both financially and emotionally.
He then goes on to explain how Kristin's spontaneous minor act of kindness brought him hope after of years of sad loneliness. He emphatically repeats his declaration of love, and praises Kristin's unconditional willingness to accept him.
Finally, he reveals the connections which made anonymous access to her clipboard possible, reveals his identity, explains that Captain Lewis is his father (who adores her too), and leaves her (presumably on CD) a love song his parents loved, in hope Kristin will love it too.
In centuries past, before the telephone and fast travel, many courtships were successfully conducted through handwritten letters. (I still have the many letters my late wife and I exchanged when we were apart one summer, over a year before we married; and I know you still have letters you and Jackson wrote to each other.) Thus, it is refreshing in our present cynical age to see such a delightfully sincere, old-fashioned courtship conducted through the written word.
Let the doubters have their say, but I like it. Superb, beautifully illustrated with the pink rose, and aptly accompanied by the chosen song.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Dear Mike, your review is so encouraging and kind. Thank you so much. It has restored my hope for more love stories here on this site.
Your generous spirit and kind words mean so much. Thank you, again. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
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You are most welcome, Sal. Yes, in this too-often painful world, more genuine love stories -- both fictional and real -- would be a joy. This one is a delight. -- Mike
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sally. Now that the mystery is over, the admirer is no longer a secret. It seems we shall move to the next milestone in the relationship if there is one. In thinking of the story, it is possible there is not a next milestone. I will keep reading to find out for myself. Z:)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hello Sally. Now that the mystery is over, the admirer is no longer a secret. It seems we shall move to the next milestone in the relationship if there is one. In thinking of the story, it is possible there is not a next milestone. I will keep reading to find out for myself. Z:)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review of my work and comments. It is always so appreciated, dear Z. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
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You're welcome Sally. Have a great week.
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You're welcome Sally. Have a great week.
Comment from royowen
I like this one Sally, such a depth of feeling, (although feelings are merely servants) beautifully and emotively written, by someone who knows what eternal love is, and its completeness. Just love it my friend. Blessings, Roy
Typo : And left me (lightening) fast. Lightning?
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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I like this one Sally, such a depth of feeling, (although feelings are merely servants) beautifully and emotively written, by someone who knows what eternal love is, and its completeness. Just love it my friend. Blessings, Roy
Typo : And left me (lightening) fast. Lightning?
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous six stars, Roy. I'm so glad all my happily married husband's and aspiring you men are enjoying these love stories as well. I am so honored by your kindness and appreciate your review.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from w.j.debi
What. Sweet letter. How could she possibly resist, especially since she has already expressed her interest in him. It looks like a love made to last. Now if they're both willing to risk it, happiness is a possibility.
A well told story.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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What. Sweet letter. How could she possibly resist, especially since she has already expressed her interest in him. It looks like a love made to last. Now if they're both willing to risk it, happiness is a possibility.
A well told story.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review and comments. It is always so appreciated, and needed. These kinds of reviews make me want to write more! Sending my very best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Well, he I a good looking and successful doctor. God certainly answered al her prayers in stellar fashion and IF He could do this with so little effort I am sure that a baby is more than possible too of she is willing to trust and follow her heart. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Well, he I a good looking and successful doctor. God certainly answered al her prayers in stellar fashion and IF He could do this with so little effort I am sure that a baby is more than possible too of she is willing to trust and follow her heart. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments, dear angel. Your reviews always means so much and are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Sugarray77
Sally, this is a very lovely write and flows beautifully through its many parts. You are so clever to use this letter format. Well done.
Hoping you have a wonderful day!
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Sally, this is a very lovely write and flows beautifully through its many parts. You are so clever to use this letter format. Well done.
Hoping you have a wonderful day!
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind compliments, dear Melissa. It is always so esteemed and appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Shivers, yes shivers is what you deliver here! Good shivers, heat-touching shivers! How humblest he speaks of his issues and thankfully has opened up about who he is! I cannot wait to see her response! She will be responding? Or is this the finale? And live this song and movie so much!!! xoxo
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Shivers, yes shivers is what you deliver here! Good shivers, heat-touching shivers! How humblest he speaks of his issues and thankfully has opened up about who he is! I cannot wait to see her response! She will be responding? Or is this the finale? And live this song and movie so much!!! xoxo
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Diana. I'm so glad you enjoyed these recent revelations. Your review is so sweet and generous and as always leaves me feeling honored.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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If only I could spell! Haha!! Fingers seem to want to type what they want I guess!! And you are so welcome, but the pleasure to read is all mine! xoxo
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That?s heart-touching shivers haha!!!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This love letter seemed so well-done I had to check the heading above to make sure it was fiction. I even kept thinking, 'Huh, this is kind of personal to post on fanstory.' One thing to fix was : left me lightening fast as
I think you mean 'lightning fast.' Otherwise, I keep thinking the character grew whiter and whiter in some new skin treatment. Nice post.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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This love letter seemed so well-done I had to check the heading above to make sure it was fiction. I even kept thinking, 'Huh, this is kind of personal to post on fanstory.' One thing to fix was : left me lightening fast as
I think you mean 'lightning fast.' Otherwise, I keep thinking the character grew whiter and whiter in some new skin treatment. Nice post.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Yes, I am blind and my new keyboard takes some getting used to. I have repaired lightning. I appreciate your review and comments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally
Comment from fm wright
So the secret lover is revealed. I like the reasons he's declared his hesitancy with its real concerns. I am on pins and needles as to Kristin's response. Also like the revealing about his father and his dog. The artwork sets it off so beautifully.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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So the secret lover is revealed. I like the reasons he's declared his hesitancy with its real concerns. I am on pins and needles as to Kristin's response. Also like the revealing about his father and his dog. The artwork sets it off so beautifully.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you, dear Faue. I'm so glad you like my story and chosen artwork for the presentation. It's good to hear what my readers like as I spend a lot of time with my presentation. I love art and music as it makes my offering a special gift to my readers as well. I am so appreciative of the stars and outstanding review. A gift to me you are.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from rjuselius
aaawwwe, this is such a sweetheart of a prose love letter dear anonymous! i thoroughly enjoyed your writing and stay wishful that it will happen to me some day.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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aaawwwe, this is such a sweetheart of a prose love letter dear anonymous! i thoroughly enjoyed your writing and stay wishful that it will happen to me some day.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much, Rebekka. Your kind review of my love letter story is greatly appreciated. She responds to him in To 'My Secret Admirer' here on FanStory. I hope you can catch them as well. These love letter stories will end Christmas Eve Eve. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo