Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

Great chapter Tony, with Kayla being very like her sister with some of her fun comments, especially the 'French letter' that 'slipped out'.
Drama and humour, a good combination
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019

Very many thanks for your review and continued encouragement, Valda. Glad you liked the balance between humour and drama in this chapter - good to know. I appreciate the sixth star, too. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Imagine how a bath would feel after months without one! He must have looked insane and smelled like skunk. And he must be starved. Any food would seem like manna from Heaven. Wine probably would have been a bad idea. They'd have been carrying him to bed with his head reeling. Milk and 7-up sounds gross, tho.

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019

Thanks very much for your comments, Cindy. You are right, he would have been in a sorry state. Hopefully, with a good scrub up and a decent meal, he'll be ready to continue the adventure. Mind you, after he's downed a milk and 7-Up, I'm not so sure! LOL