Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
This is a clear definition and fits the contest perfectly. It sould be the way we look at each other. We are basically the same though we look different.
I like the artwork
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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JLR,
This is a clear definition and fits the contest perfectly. It sould be the way we look at each other. We are basically the same though we look different.
I like the artwork
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Joan, I thank you for the validation and support.
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You're welcome on both accounts.
Joan
Comment from Lobber
Hello there,
I must admit that I have never liked teacup poems and my position remains the same...that said, you have done an admirable job with the silly task at hand...and...some neeeet artwork to go with it. Congrats. - Lobber
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Hello there,
I must admit that I have never liked teacup poems and my position remains the same...that said, you have done an admirable job with the silly task at hand...and...some neeeet artwork to go with it. Congrats. - Lobber
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Lobber, Roger that! Thanks for the positive nod.
Comment from Gail Denham
Interesting - to be identified with oneself. Hmmm - not sure that's always a happy coupling - since I fancy myself slightly kooky. However, I liked the poem. good job.
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Interesting - to be identified with oneself. Hmmm - not sure that's always a happy coupling - since I fancy myself slightly kooky. However, I liked the poem. good job.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Gail, hee hee, don't we all at times seem, as you state, kooky. LOL
Comment from Janet Foor
This teacup poem, Indistinguishability, is delightful. I am not familiar with this form but in your twenty-letter poem, you have created a well written piece to be proud of. Good luck in the contest. Looks like a winner to me.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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This teacup poem, Indistinguishability, is delightful. I am not familiar with this form but in your twenty-letter poem, you have created a well written piece to be proud of. Good luck in the contest. Looks like a winner to me.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Janet, Wow! Thank you and thank you again!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a really good word to find that had the full twenty letters in it. Then to write a teacup poem from it, was even more clever. The poem itself is well thought out, and it's not easy to find the mirror image of oneself. Some people would wonder, do I want to? It depends of what sort of person you are. I hope I wouldn't be upset to meet mine. Well done. This is a great contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xxx
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That was a really good word to find that had the full twenty letters in it. Then to write a teacup poem from it, was even more clever. The poem itself is well thought out, and it's not easy to find the mirror image of oneself. Some people would wonder, do I want to? It depends of what sort of person you are. I hope I wouldn't be upset to meet mine. Well done. This is a great contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Sandra, oh yes, I would be afraid I would likely run into one of my shadows , UGH!
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LOL!!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very good! I saw the contest to write a teacup poem, but can't figure out how to write one! This is a good one. I wish you luck with the contest!! Have a great day!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Very good! I saw the contest to write a teacup poem, but can't figure out how to write one! This is a good one. I wish you luck with the contest!! Have a great day!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Patty, thank you -- The challenge is to find a word on the list provided that you can work with the provided website does help
here: http://www.poetrydances.com/teacup_dictionary.php
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Thanks for explaining to me how this works. Maybe I'll get a chance to try one!
Patty
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a distinguished soliloquy, striking in both verse and imagery, an intelligent description of oneself in verse, fully compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest for this thought provoking write...
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In my opinion, a distinguished soliloquy, striking in both verse and imagery, an intelligent description of oneself in verse, fully compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest for this thought provoking write...
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Eve, I appreciate your validation.
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You're very welcome, JLR...Eve
Comment from Barbaraj1
This was not an easy contest. You did a wonderful job with it. You started
out with an eight syllable word. The whole poem is well written. Good luck in the contest.
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This was not an easy contest. You did a wonderful job with it. You started
out with an eight syllable word. The whole poem is well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Barbara, I very much appreciate your validation!
Comment from Bill Schott
You need to remove the title from the poemâ??s
Nature of being alike
identical with self
mirrored images
is selfsameness
reflection
oneness
one
being identical with self
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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You need to remove the title from the poemâ??s
Nature of being alike
identical with self
mirrored images
is selfsameness
reflection
oneness
one
being identical with self
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Bill, thank you fro the six-star validation! I would have hated having this in a spelling bee contest LOL
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, Well done! you have very cleverly found a 20 letter word and this is very well displayed, exactly like a teacup. Very well thought out and a good overall display. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
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Hello JLR, Well done! you have very cleverly found a 20 letter word and this is very well displayed, exactly like a teacup. Very well thought out and a good overall display. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Dorothy, thank you for the good wishes.