Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Spinning, Twisting, Turning"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from padumachitta
Hello
Wow great bit of art and a good poem for it.
I like the language, the pace and the final line.
In fact I thought the whole thing was well put together.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hello
Wow great bit of art and a good poem for it.
I like the language, the pace and the final line.
In fact I thought the whole thing was well put together.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I thought this FS art very good subject material to work with, thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for the good wishes!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like your globe and it's wonders; we sometimes do live in a twisted, winding world, like you described. I hope that soon our world and its global environment will calm down.
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I like your globe and it's wonders; we sometimes do live in a twisted, winding world, like you described. I hope that soon our world and its global environment will calm down.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Rosemary, I thought this FS art very good subject material to work with, thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for the good wishes!
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful artwork that inspired your creative verse. I like the use of repetition and monorhyme to give the sensation of continual movement of the earth.
Nice ending that sums up our human journey. Running on the spot!
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Beautiful artwork that inspired your creative verse. I like the use of repetition and monorhyme to give the sensation of continual movement of the earth.
Nice ending that sums up our human journey. Running on the spot!
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Julia, I thought this FS art very good subject material to work with, thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for the good wishes!
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Yes you chose well.
Comment from Carl DeVere
Excellent! If more people suddenly woke up to the fact that it's just not about themselves all the time, the world could look very different. You and I are on the same page. Well done.
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Excellent! If more people suddenly woke up to the fact that it's just not about themselves all the time, the world could look very different. You and I are on the same page. Well done.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Carl, Hi! I thought this FS art very good subject material to work with, thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for the validation!
Comment from papa55mike
It sounds like our world today! What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. This is a great contest.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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It sounds like our world today! What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. This is a great contest.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Hello My friend! I thought this FS art very good subject material to work with, thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for the good wishes and God's blessing!