Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from LisaMay
Your 3-5-3 contest entry is an excellent description of "passion", conveying the way we can be suddenly gripped by love in a hold that is beyond our control and feels inevitable and inescapable.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Your 3-5-3 contest entry is an excellent description of "passion", conveying the way we can be suddenly gripped by love in a hold that is beyond our control and feels inevitable and inescapable.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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LisaMay, thanks for the great validation!
Comment from Ogden
That's a terrific definition of 'passion, nd undoubtedly a contender!' I can't say I wish you good luck, because I have an entry in the contest, too.
Ogden
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That's a terrific definition of 'passion, nd undoubtedly a contender!' I can't say I wish you good luck, because I have an entry in the contest, too.
Ogden
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Don I send you my best wishes for success anyway, we brothers in writing, must stand shoulder to shoulder against the onslaught of the feminine words of wisdom forthcoming, I am certain.
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Brothers, you say? Thanks, 'brother!'