Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Rhinoceros"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you know your rhinos! They are magnificent animals and should be left alone to to enjoy some peace, a fine nonet in tribute of the rhino, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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It sounds like you know your rhinos! They are magnificent animals and should be left alone to to enjoy some peace, a fine nonet in tribute of the rhino, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Dolly, I do thank you!
Comment from Alchera
Nine rhymed verses well written throughout its syllable counting structural format required and beautiful white wild rhyno's descriptive and narrative contest. Many wild animals are extinguishing today and also The Rhyno. A good job!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Nine rhymed verses well written throughout its syllable counting structural format required and beautiful white wild rhyno's descriptive and narrative contest. Many wild animals are extinguishing today and also The Rhyno. A good job!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Alchera, good afternoon! Thank you for your kind reflections.
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Always welcome!
Comment from Therese Caron
Great poem about the wonderful rhinoceros. He is so odd looking that it makes him look wonderful. He lumbers along, looking like a king. He looks so much like a direct descendent from a dinosaur. Your image complements your writing very well. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Great poem about the wonderful rhinoceros. He is so odd looking that it makes him look wonderful. He lumbers along, looking like a king. He looks so much like a direct descendent from a dinosaur. Your image complements your writing very well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Therese, I do thank you!
Comment from Boogienights
I'm learning a lot about different animals through reading these contest entries. It is a very interesting and epic animal, but also a little scary. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I'm learning a lot about different animals through reading these contest entries. It is a very interesting and epic animal, but also a little scary. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I do thank you!
Comment from GregoryCody
Very good! Nice assonance in Massive and passive. The whole piece moves along nicely due to these tools. Not to mention that the message is fun! You have chosen really good words like pliant, etc. seriously well done!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Very good! Nice assonance in Massive and passive. The whole piece moves along nicely due to these tools. Not to mention that the message is fun! You have chosen really good words like pliant, etc. seriously well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Gregory, I do thank you!
Comment from Susan Larson
Although I've never attempted to compose a nonet, I have to admire how you skillfully incorporated your rhyming words into the rhythm of your syllable count. And the rhino does seem to get slighted when it comes to poetry and children's books. I'm glad you gave him some recognition.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Although I've never attempted to compose a nonet, I have to admire how you skillfully incorporated your rhyming words into the rhythm of your syllable count. And the rhino does seem to get slighted when it comes to poetry and children's books. I'm glad you gave him some recognition.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you Susan, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
I had to smile after reading it. I thought ,I know some people just like that.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
I had to smile after reading it. I thought ,I know some people just like that.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Cookie, Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a fun and witty animal nonet poem for the contest.
Perfect picture to compliment your work. These rhinos are gentle giants.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is a fun and witty animal nonet poem for the contest.
Perfect picture to compliment your work. These rhinos are gentle giants.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Janet,Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and choice of animal.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like "passive giant."
-Good description of its
appearance and qualities,
as well as good concluding lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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-Very nice image
and choice of animal.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like "passive giant."
-Good description of its
appearance and qualities,
as well as good concluding lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Pam, CoThank you. I appreciate your comments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
A great combination of rhyme, scheme, shape and image. Not a likely celebrity, but as written in this nonet the rhino rises to the distinction of a worthy contender for favorite. Good entry for this contest... ...ec
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A great combination of rhyme, scheme, shape and image. Not a likely celebrity, but as written in this nonet the rhino rises to the distinction of a worthy contender for favorite. Good entry for this contest... ...ec
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Elaine, I am honored and humbled, thank you. The Rhino shines through your kindness.
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you're welcome... ...ec