Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Diana L Crawford
Love this Acrostic offering for the club! You project a strong statement about being a spiritual vessel. It is only in our hearts that we can reach Him. The great I AM
Thanks for sharing!
xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Love this Acrostic offering for the club! You project a strong statement about being a spiritual vessel. It is only in our hearts that we can reach Him. The great I AM
Thanks for sharing!
xoxo
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Diana, thank you!
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Welcome! xoxo
Comment from Janet Foor
Perfect artwork to compliment this well written poem. I am not familiar with this form but I enjoyed reading it and the message it conveyed.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Perfect artwork to compliment this well written poem. I am not familiar with this form but I enjoyed reading it and the message it conveyed.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Janet, thank you!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This beautiful picture perfectly illustrates the outstanding poem. This is a very interesting requirement of how the poem is arranged. Lots of thought had to go into this work.Great post.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This beautiful picture perfectly illustrates the outstanding poem. This is a very interesting requirement of how the poem is arranged. Lots of thought had to go into this work.Great post.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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thaites, thank you for the review and validation on this poem.
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You're quite welcome!
Comment from Gail Denham
Another interesting form and idea for a poem. This is a good poem with a great image to go with it. Yielding to God - a thing we all must do - should do - in following His directions.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Another interesting form and idea for a poem. This is a good poem with a great image to go with it. Yielding to God - a thing we all must do - should do - in following His directions.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Gail, I am glad you enjoyed this -
Comment from Pirate Sam
"I am that, I am" amazing poem my friend prayer is there anything more extraordinary than the power of prayer? I know there is not in my own life's experience and thank you for explaining the format here im determined to attempt my own "Spirits Vessel" today wish me luck and enjoy your day
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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"I am that, I am" amazing poem my friend prayer is there anything more extraordinary than the power of prayer? I know there is not in my own life's experience and thank you for explaining the format here im determined to attempt my own "Spirits Vessel" today wish me luck and enjoy your day
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Pirate Sam, enjoy the solitude the poem will bring forth.
Comment from BethShelby
This is so well written and the message is beautiful. The words compliment this amazing picture. I enjoyed reading this. This is a wonderful form of poetry.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This is so well written and the message is beautiful. The words compliment this amazing picture. I enjoyed reading this. This is a wonderful form of poetry.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Beth, I delight that you enjoyed the poetic message!
Comment from jusylee72
Your poem from years ago says it all in your title. Very well written and I am sure this will be loved by your family in the years to come. Very spiritual. Thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Your poem from years ago says it all in your title. Very well written and I am sure this will be loved by your family in the years to come. Very spiritual. Thank you.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Never heard of this form so thank you for the author's notes. It is perfectly done, uplifting and gives a message of hope and faith. Love this challenge piece and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Never heard of this form so thank you for the author's notes. It is perfectly done, uplifting and gives a message of hope and faith. Love this challenge piece and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Barb, thank you, have a glorious weekend!
Comment from Wynter Lee
I really like your poem because even though I'm not religious I like reading poems about people's belief in religion. I think my favorite part is your second paragraph because I can just imagine a young child opening their eyes for the first time especially when you talk about "Youthful Innocence's," and, "Opened to our first breaths." I think you did spell innocence wrong if you wanted to fix it. (:
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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I really like your poem because even though I'm not religious I like reading poems about people's belief in religion. I think my favorite part is your second paragraph because I can just imagine a young child opening their eyes for the first time especially when you talk about "Youthful Innocence's," and, "Opened to our first breaths." I think you did spell innocence wrong if you wanted to fix it. (:
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Oh, great catch! Thank you so much, I am more spiritual than religious. I believe we all have the sate of innocence when we come into this world and then life happens.
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No problem! I wasn't entirely sure how to spell it either it kind of just popped up when I spelled it in my spellcheck!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your poem echo in. Y head. I am the vessel of your prayer, I am the vessel of your hopes and I am the vessel of your life trust me. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Your poem echo in. Y head. I am the vessel of your prayer, I am the vessel of your hopes and I am the vessel of your life trust me. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Iza, thank you, JLR