Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Gail Denham
Good job with this form - and how I agree with you - I have a couple such friends - who pray for me, listen, encourage, - it's great to have such a friend - and I also have friends of such long-standing who do care.
Good poem
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Good job with this form - and how I agree with you - I have a couple such friends - who pray for me, listen, encourage, - it's great to have such a friend - and I also have friends of such long-standing who do care.
Good poem
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Gail, I am so delighted that your life is enriched with such friends!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Oh my. What lovely words. The pain is clearly there and you let it out powerfully. The picture is a perfect compliment to the words. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Oh my. What lovely words. The pain is clearly there and you let it out powerfully. The picture is a perfect compliment to the words. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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thaites, thank you fro your review and comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Soul Friend"
The Writer speaks of friends and friendship.
And the older we get you were that remained.
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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"Soul Friend"
The Writer speaks of friends and friendship.
And the older we get you were that remained.
...
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Doctor Rickey, thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, JLR,
.....Soul Friend....is a beautiful poem about friendship and how much it helps when one is going through a difficult time in life. Good job, my friend.
gypsy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Hello, JLR,
.....Soul Friend....is a beautiful poem about friendship and how much it helps when one is going through a difficult time in life. Good job, my friend.
gypsy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Gypsy, thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
I've never tried this, although I am known for my love of the Nonet form. It is my favorite. I will need to try one of these. What's one more line of syllables? A sweet one and healing balm within. Your syllable count is spot on, too, as is key to a form poem like the double Etheree. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I've never tried this, although I am known for my love of the Nonet form. It is my favorite. I will need to try one of these. What's one more line of syllables? A sweet one and healing balm within. Your syllable count is spot on, too, as is key to a form poem like the double Etheree. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Sally!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Soul friend such a beautiful ballad which reminds me that we care deep inside a part of our God that is our soul companion. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Soul friend such a beautiful ballad which reminds me that we care deep inside a part of our God that is our soul companion. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Iza, thank you!
Comment from jaded831
We should all have a friend like that, we wouldn't need psych meds or psychiatrist.
I had a friend like that but she died. Your poem reminded me of that relationship. Thank you for writing this poem.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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We should all have a friend like that, we wouldn't need psych meds or psychiatrist.
I had a friend like that but she died. Your poem reminded me of that relationship. Thank you for writing this poem.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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jade, thank your for your sharing and I am sorry for your loss!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written double Etheree about someone who we can depend on helping us in any situation when we need someone to lean on. They always calm us down and bring peace to our minds.
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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A very well-written double Etheree about someone who we can depend on helping us in any situation when we need someone to lean on. They always calm us down and bring peace to our minds.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Sandra, thank you!
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely double etheree poem. I enjoyed learning a new Celtic word. It has a lovely lilting sound to it. Being Irish, I enjoyed the thought.
Well done.
Blessings
janet
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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A lovely double etheree poem. I enjoyed learning a new Celtic word. It has a lovely lilting sound to it. Being Irish, I enjoyed the thought.
Well done.
Blessings
janet
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Janet, thank you and I celebrate your Irishness!