Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think you a great and inspiring poem. Gid and first responders are very important. I know that God is going to make things better. Great and well written poem!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I think you a great and inspiring poem. Gid and first responders are very important. I know that God is going to make things better. Great and well written poem!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Jeffrey, I trust that you are able to find some calm in these difficult days, stay well my friend.
Comment from TPAC
A very creative composed write, finding many delighting aspects presented in its read, loving your conclusion of halo. All stated in my opinion. I found this read a touching write which should be applied at all times.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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A very creative composed write, finding many delighting aspects presented in its read, loving your conclusion of halo. All stated in my opinion. I found this read a touching write which should be applied at all times.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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TPAC, I can not thank you enough for your validating comments. Be well!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, a well written free verse for your club entry, acknowledging the trying times we are all up against and you justly praise those who are risking their lives to help save others.
We are in this together and together
we will either sparkle or sizzle;
do we do our part for all of mankind? - Good question! Well done and warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hello JLR, a well written free verse for your club entry, acknowledging the trying times we are all up against and you justly praise those who are risking their lives to help save others.
We are in this together and together
we will either sparkle or sizzle;
do we do our part for all of mankind? - Good question! Well done and warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Dorothy, thank you for this validation, I pray you are finding peace and comfort during these difficult days.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Beautifully composed. The flow of this poem is remarkable and the overall effect quite wonderful with your choice of the visual part. Change nothing about this piece. It is perfect! (I have no sixes!)
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Beautifully composed. The flow of this poem is remarkable and the overall effect quite wonderful with your choice of the visual part. Change nothing about this piece. It is perfect! (I have no sixes!)
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Wendy thank you, virtual hug back!
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
This free verse done in tercets is a good poem in praise and thanks for the first responders and healthcare workers who put themselves in danger of contracting the virus every day in order to cure those with it. It is true that we all need to due our part in helping each other thruough this.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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JLR,
This free verse done in tercets is a good poem in praise and thanks for the first responders and healthcare workers who put themselves in danger of contracting the virus every day in order to cure those with it. It is true that we all need to due our part in helping each other thruough this.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Joan, thank you for your validating comments. One of our daughters is on the front line in healthcare in Seattle, we pray for her and her colleagues during these tumultuous times.
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You're welcome. Thanks to your daughter. She will be in my prayers
also.
Joan
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, nice poem and excellent structure. I enjoyed the words and so inspiring especially during these trying times. Nice presentation and well structured stanzas. Nice attractive images. All the best
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi, nice poem and excellent structure. I enjoyed the words and so inspiring especially during these trying times. Nice presentation and well structured stanzas. Nice attractive images. All the best
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Heavenempress, I am so honored! I very much appreciate your validation and comments.
Comment from Boogienights
So many people risking themselves to help others..they deserve halos. My daughrer and son are both hospital workers and I fear for them, but I'm also proud of them. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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So many people risking themselves to help others..they deserve halos. My daughrer and son are both hospital workers and I fear for them, but I'm also proud of them. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I am so much in awe of all healthcare professionals and the undying efforts to work in these tumultuous times. You have every right to be proud! My prayer is the will stay safe!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine write championing the nurses and health workers out there faced with the task of battling against this virus, we all pray they stay safe, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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A fine write championing the nurses and health workers out there faced with the task of battling against this virus, we all pray they stay safe, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Dolly, thank you! How about your 65,000 thousand retired doctors and nurses who are coming back to the front line, that is powerful and a great reflection that mankind still has hope to get this right!
Comment from royowen
One would have to say, those workers that quietly go about their wondrous duty, they certainly deserve praise, what a wonderful post, free verse, written in sestets, a great tribute poem my friend, well dine, blessings. Roy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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One would have to say, those workers that quietly go about their wondrous duty, they certainly deserve praise, what a wonderful post, free verse, written in sestets, a great tribute poem my friend, well dine, blessings. Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I am so honored! I very much appreciate your validation and comments.
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Good job Jim
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Thank you for sharing your halo through this poem. You poem reminds the reader that we too can choose to be the hands and feet of Christ to a very needy world, especially through this present crisis. God bless you and keep shining.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your halo through this poem. You poem reminds the reader that we too can choose to be the hands and feet of Christ to a very needy world, especially through this present crisis. God bless you and keep shining.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I am so honored! I very much appreciate your validation and comments.