Still Awaiting The One
His-n-Hers22 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
You would be absolutely great at writing monologues for stand-up comedians because the way your write, I can almost hear the expression in words being said aloud. This piece does express very clearly why marriages break apart. I've always believed the storybook romances don't last because both parties have unrealistic expectations.
Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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You would be absolutely great at writing monologues for stand-up comedians because the way your write, I can almost hear the expression in words being said aloud. This piece does express very clearly why marriages break apart. I've always believed the storybook romances don't last because both parties have unrealistic expectations.
Well done.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thanks Beth. Alas, some people are always restless for someone "better" who will magically make life perfect. I would love to write monologues for comedians! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I really like the strong characters that come through in this! The voices feel real and conversational, and are therefore incredibly engaging. Well done!
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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I really like the strong characters that come through in this! The voices feel real and conversational, and are therefore incredibly engaging. Well done!
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thanks Anya. I am pleased that you felt the characters and conversation were real and engaging, despite my contriving them to parrot many of each other's words (per the footnote). Cheers. LIZ
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You are very welcome!